|Reviews for Isle Esme|
| twilightobession chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
So Edward!Love this story. Very well written. Love it.
| twilightobession chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Love this. It is so tyical Edward. Good job.
| Esme B chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
You are an extremely talented writer! What a great story!
| Horizon77 chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Wow. This is far and away the most well-written "missing moment" I've read for Breaking Dawn, and one of the best stories for Twilight in general. Your handling of the characters was just perfect.
I think I was most impressed with writing style. It has a maturity that is lacking in the genre. Thank you so much for completing and sharing!
| ReluctantRomantic chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Amazing. Your characterization of Edward during that time feels so incredibly real, believable, and easily reconcilable with canon. It's so in line with his tendency to over-think and over-analyze everything. Well-done!
| MrsFreiden8 chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Thanks for finishing part two!
| LindyP chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
I really enjoyed reading this story! Is this done or are you planning on writing the rest of their story on Isle Esme? I would love to get your take on the rest of their honeymoon. Great story!
| bella1309 chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Wow! Lets just say that it was DEFINITELY worth the wait! What a fantastic read! I'm so glad that someone actually wrote Edwards point of view at this crucial point in their relationship - and did it brilliantly, too. Thank you so much. PLEASE keep writing!
| ANovacastrian chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
*sigh* Poor Edward, all that pleasure and then he comes crashing back to reality realising that he has hurt her... again. Though it is once again an overreaction, I mean, she is not dead, there are no broken bones, he hasn't even torn her skin (well except once ;)...) Beautifully written, your descriptions were the perfect balance between tasteful and passion. Not to mention that you captured Edward perfectly, his over analysing, his need to control. I love how you intertwined the pillows in, very clever.
Thanks, and continue if you want D tho... yay B and W chapter out tomorrow.
| babbles chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
So well written, So good! I had almost forgotten about this story, I had to go back and re-read the first chapter before this one... I had forgotten how well you had written this, So very Edward... I dont know if you intend to continue but you should... There second attempt would be so perfect from your words...
| rindycella chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Wow. That was so very perfect-it seems so plausible. I've not actually read any "missing moment" fanfics before, but I've been so caught up in "Black and White," that I figured yours might be worth a try. Glad I read it-as with B&W, the intense look inside the character's head is simply fantastic.
| megstar28 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
This is beautiful ... please continue- I've never read a better version of what was going through Edward's head on Isle Esme. Thank you thank you thank you!
keep going! ;)
| heart of steel chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
That was so worth the wait! The way you described everything that was happening to Edward was amazing.
NO wonder the poor boy had to take it out on the pillows!
Looking forward to reading more!
| Abasketcase chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
.God. You amaze me. You are utterly one of the most talented authors on Twilight fanfic. Honestly. I'm actually going to say that if Stephenie Meyer were to have written this lemon in Edward's Point of View it would have been NOTHING compared to this. I think you know her characters better than she does. Which leads me to this. This is the only 100 percent in character lemon I have ever read. Even ones that claim to be in character and they are specifically written for Breaking Dawn, do not come close. You have expressed such raw emotions from Edward that I CRIED during the last few paragraphs when he realized what he had done. Breaking Dawn looks like fanfic written by teen boppers compared to this masterpiece. And I'm not just saying that because I think you're awesome. I'm saying it because it is utterly true, should be fact. You did such a flawless job on this. I thank you for updating it.
| Twlightchick14 chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
my head is spinning pleseasa riete a thirdd one