Reviews for Isle Esme
bella1309 chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Wow! Lets just say that it was DEFINITELY worth the wait! What a fantastic read! I'm so glad that someone actually wrote Edwards point of view at this crucial point in their relationship - and did it brilliantly, too. Thank you so much. PLEASE keep writing!
ANovacastrian chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
*sigh* Poor Edward, all that pleasure and then he comes crashing back to reality realising that he has hurt her... again. Though it is once again an overreaction, I mean, she is not dead, there are no broken bones, he hasn't even torn her skin (well except once ;)...) Beautifully written, your descriptions were the perfect balance between tasteful and passion. Not to mention that you captured Edward perfectly, his over analysing, his need to control. I love how you intertwined the pillows in, very clever.

Thanks, and continue if you want D tho... yay B and W chapter out tomorrow.

babbles chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
So well written, So good! I had almost forgotten about this story, I had to go back and re-read the first chapter before this one... I had forgotten how well you had written this, So very Edward... I dont know if you intend to continue but you should... There second attempt would be so perfect from your words...
rindycella chapter 2 . 12/13/2008
Wow. That was so very perfect-it seems so plausible. I've not actually read any "missing moment" fanfics before, but I've been so caught up in "Black and White," that I figured yours might be worth a try. Glad I read it-as with B&W, the intense look inside the character's head is simply fantastic.
megstar28 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
This is beautiful ... please continue- I've never read a better version of what was going through Edward's head on Isle Esme. Thank you thank you thank you!

keep going! ;)
heart of steel chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
That was so worth the wait! The way you described everything that was happening to Edward was amazing.

NO wonder the poor boy had to take it out on the pillows!

Looking forward to reading more!
Abasketcase chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
.God. You amaze me. You are utterly one of the most talented authors on Twilight fanfic. Honestly. I'm actually going to say that if Stephenie Meyer were to have written this lemon in Edward's Point of View it would have been NOTHING compared to this. I think you know her characters better than she does. Which leads me to this. This is the only 100 percent in character lemon I have ever read. Even ones that claim to be in character and they are specifically written for Breaking Dawn, do not come close. You have expressed such raw emotions from Edward that I CRIED during the last few paragraphs when he realized what he had done. Breaking Dawn looks like fanfic written by teen boppers compared to this masterpiece. And I'm not just saying that because I think you're awesome. I'm saying it because it is utterly true, should be fact. You did such a flawless job on this. I thank you for updating it.
Twlightchick14 chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
my head is spinning pleseasa riete a thirdd one
BlackVelvetWoman chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
This was an incredible well-written story of how Edward and Bella's night should have been described in Breaking Dawn. I absolutely loved this.
Jae B chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
So I have been looking for a well written and intelligent edward/bella story for DAYS and this definitely hit the mark!

It's so believable! I LOVED IT!

Kez chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
Hands down the BEST EPOV of the Breaking Dawn Isle Esme scenes I have read. Totally believable and not rushed-feeling. Hope to see more soon. :D
TearsofBlack101 chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
This was so beautiful. I was concerned that Isle Esme would be smutty, but it was just wonderful. It was so poetically written. I love your word choice. Absolutely exquisite.
icefang7 chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
as always, your writing is awsome. love this and am looking

forward to another chapter of black and white! soo sorry you are ill...feel better soon and thanks!
rockgirl2011 chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
That was amazing! You write EPOV wonderfully. Thnx for part 2.

mbpunbearable chapter 2 . 12/12/2008
WOW! So, I had told myself I was going to take my time to read this chapter but, just like sex, once you start it is so hard to stop! So I finished it in one sitting.

Well, that was hot!

but at the same time Poor Edward! What a torture! I am glad things become easier for him later on, especially when Bella becomes his equal and he can finally let go and love freely!

Oh, and I'm glad to finally know whatever happened to those pillows!

Thanks! This was brilliant!

Feel better soon!

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