Reviews for Isle Esme
Daria90 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I need a cold shower now for sure. How did you write it so true to a Edward's character while conveing the feeling, that still, he is just a MAN who's having sex for the first time. Who is losing himself. Losing himself despite his infinite love for Bella, despite being Edward! I liked how the tension builds and progesses. I like the way he gradually gives in. I LOVED his lonely moment in the middle of the mayhem (in the middle of the sexy sexy sex I mean). It was absolutely heartbreaking. Just wanted to give him a hug, lol. O.k going to reread it again. Gosh...You are such a good writer...
IceChocolateTammy chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
this is awesome! you are a really good writter :)
Blairx6661 chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
This was great, just great. A perfectly well-written insight into Edward's mind at the beginning of his and Bella's honeymoon. Outstanding :)

xxx
bellamason92 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
The best Isle Esme fiction ever. It's just WOW.
lovetwilight4ever chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
like the story
mysecrets101 chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
I absolutely looove it.
Patty chapter 2 . 3/19/2011
very good story
dazzledhuman chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
How wonderful. I was totally mesmerised throughout. Even in some small way hoping to change history so that Edward would not have to feel the defeat at the end of such an amazing feat.

Just wonderful.

Cheers

J
bpanther chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
Excellent, it was breathtaking.

I could almost feel his own emotions, relate to them.

That was so insightful.

Amazing, congrats!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Nicely done! This is neat!
3Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I am so moved by this writing!

Never have I read such complex and erotic composition. Every sentence, expression, intoxicating.

And so tasteful, and tasty.

Thank you so much!

I only wish to see the same curtain closed chapters revealed through your exquisite writing.

Thanks

3D
cilou1006 chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
I love your fic : it is exactly what was missing from BD.

you succeed in 2 challenges : first, writing on a honeymoon without being vulgar. on the contrary, it is intense, slowly increasing, beautiful. second, taking Edward's POV, making him understandable in spite of his existential crisis and still keep this moment magic.

Thank you very much !
fancynancy2007 chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
I'm sad that this one is complete. I really enjoyed it!
fancynancy2007 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
This was the very first fanfic I ever read. Thank you for filling in this missing moment.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
I absolutely loved it I was I'm presses I was Archie edge of my seat wondering what would happen next I hope you go far
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