|Reviews for Isle Esme|
| 84gemstone chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
Loves is not that word this is so much better then BD...poor Edward don't worry she loved it more then you will ever no lol
| 84gemstone chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
That was so sweet and I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter ;0)
| Joanne Reading chapter 2 . 9/28/2010
This was so beautiful! Very well written!
| jane-with-a-y chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
All I can say is that I hope that Melissa Rosenberg and Bill Condon read this story before they begin Breaking Dawn. This is one of the first fan fiction stories I read and it continues to be my favorite. You are a gifted and talented writer. Are you sure your not Stephanie Meyers posing as a FF writer? LOL! I sure wish you'd write a few more chapters! LOVE Your stories...MORE MORE MORE!
| ileftmyscar chapter 2 . 9/23/2010
I'm speechless, other than three words-
THIS. IS. PERFECT.
| lucy01 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Just wanted to say i love ur account of the honeymoon. I read ur story back last december before i joined ff. So thank u for being my first ff read. :) and i truley have not found a better account of time on isle esme as urs. I love ur writing. Have also read burn and reallly liked it as well. U have a gift and write beatifully. I look forward to reading more of ur work!
| katie.escapist chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
this was really good and so skillfully written too :) its a shame you didnt carry on with the rest of the honeymoon but for a 2 part story it was very very good :) i especially loved the last line :)
| freakybella chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
When I first read this, I was a newborn to fan fic. I didn't take the time to review and I'm sorry. This was one of the first ones I read, and I still love it.
I am creating a community to put all of my favorite one shots and when I came across this one, I checked and I hadn't reviewed, so I'm doing so now. I loved this just like I love so many other of your stories. I can't wait to read Black & White. Hopefully, I hear about it soon.
| DeleteThisPlease9999 chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
Thanks for the glimpse into the thoughts of Edward. Sadly, if he HAD been able to read Bella's thoughts, he'd have known that that
passion and losing a little of his self-control was exactly what she wanted from him. He could have gone on congratulating himself instead of beating himself up and making Bella feel like crap.
| DeleteThisPlease9999 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
great EPOV, totally sounds like him.
| a. cullen chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
this was... i can't find words to describe it. thank you- you made my day. or week perhaps. month maybe? it was beautiful, passionate, lustful, and deep. you are a great writer, obviously; so just continue writing (please).
p.s. greetings from croatia :)
| beautifullyhigh chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
That was amazing. Heart breaking even from beginning to end. I love how beautifly you wrote him how tastful. You could really feel his anguish, his battle. Bravo
| breeleigh chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I am obssesed with your writing style. You greatly capture Edward's perspective! Do you do request? If so, the other two love scenes that occur in their honeymoon would be satisfying to read and fill up the emptyness I felt when reading breaking dawn. Thank you so much!
| Gina chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
Love it! Great writing!
| paigey12 chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
I luv ur story. Keep writing:)