Reviews for Isle Esme
lucy01 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
Just wanted to say i love ur account of the honeymoon. I read ur story back last december before i joined ff. So thank u for being my first ff read. :) and i truley have not found a better account of time on isle esme as urs. I love ur writing. Have also read burn and reallly liked it as well. U have a gift and write beatifully. I look forward to reading more of ur work!
katie.escapist chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
this was really good and so skillfully written too :) its a shame you didnt carry on with the rest of the honeymoon but for a 2 part story it was very very good :) i especially loved the last line :)
freakybella chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
When I first read this, I was a newborn to fan fic. I didn't take the time to review and I'm sorry. This was one of the first ones I read, and I still love it.

I am creating a community to put all of my favorite one shots and when I came across this one, I checked and I hadn't reviewed, so I'm doing so now. I loved this just like I love so many other of your stories. I can't wait to read Black & White. Hopefully, I hear about it soon.

freakybella
DeleteThisPlease9999 chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
Thanks for the glimpse into the thoughts of Edward. Sadly, if he HAD been able to read Bella's thoughts, he'd have known that that

passion and losing a little of his self-control was exactly what she wanted from him. He could have gone on congratulating himself instead of beating himself up and making Bella feel like crap.
DeleteThisPlease9999 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
great EPOV, totally sounds like him.
a. cullen chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
this was... i can't find words to describe it. thank you- you made my day. or week perhaps. month maybe? it was beautiful, passionate, lustful, and deep. you are a great writer, obviously; so just continue writing (please).

p.s. greetings from croatia :)
beautifullyhigh chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
That was amazing. Heart breaking even from beginning to end. I love how beautifly you wrote him how tastful. You could really feel his anguish, his battle. Bravo
breeleigh chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I am obssesed with your writing style. You greatly capture Edward's perspective! Do you do request? If so, the other two love scenes that occur in their honeymoon would be satisfying to read and fill up the emptyness I felt when reading breaking dawn. Thank you so much!
Gina chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
Love it! Great writing!
paigey12 chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
I luv ur story. Keep writing:)
Wanderer79 chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
This is probably the most subtle story I have ever read about “the missing time” on Isle Esme. Most of the stories have Edward and Bella going at it like porn stars (because all virgins know how to do that stuff, right?) and completely miss the mark as far as the characters go. This is probably the best one I have read that stays true to the characters we know and love and very vividly captures the combination of passion and restraint that I had always envisioned in that scene. Bravo!
Sarah chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
Great story- really good writing.
priscillachristine chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
Interesting... Steamy... Exactly what I imagined and hoped SM would of written for the Honeymoon. Took & told us the part we were blocked from in BD and most importantly gave us a glipmse at the Edward POV that we are always lagging. Maybe we should send this to Melissa Rosenberg just to help her out with the Breaking Dawn script. Ha JK. No, umm maybe we should. :)
priscillachristine chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
In my opinion you captured his thoughts and it reminded me of Midnight Sun's Edward. Good Start... You managed to capture what we didn't see in Breaking Dawn and the EPOV. :)
jane-with-a-y chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Although you wrote this story sometime ago, I wanted to share my sentiments. This story was by far the best Isle Esme I have read on fanfic. You are the only author I have read who captured Edwards personality, mannerisms, speech and his emotions. Now I am not one to shy away from lemons, God knows if they're not getting busy 3 chapters in...I move on! But your story was...ELEGANT, SEXY, EROTIC, and somehow, GRACEFUL. I actually felt as though Stephanie Meyers wrote it herself.(If she had had the balls to do so). This is the only fan-fiction I ever printed off. I look forward to reading more of your works!
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