Reviews for Mistaken Vows
jk chapter 14 . 3/7/2015
it just seems really fucking stupid that bella didn't fuck jake...im just saying shes only human and its just no normal to be a 20 year old virgin for years with a hot as fuck werewolf alpha male...no wonder jake wanted to kick her ass...they've been together all this time and the ONE time they have sex she cries the whole time...hes a animal hes sexually frustrated of course he wants to kick her ass. just saying
and Edward is stupid as fuck for not taking back up...1 vampire can not stand up to that many wolves lets be realistic here...its piano playing I hardly ever fight skinny 17 year old Edward! Not jasper or Emmett!
MyladyNancy chapter 19 . 1/26/2015
thank you, what a lovely, heart wrenching, tear dripping, gentle story. it was fun to read. like those before me I would love to have seen this continue on. but I can be content in this moment. have a wonderful day...
omg omg omg omg chapter 19 . 11/14/2014
Plz write bout bella becomes a vampire plz plz plz!
Iceblondie chapter 19 . 9/24/2014
Omg this was a beautiful sorry. It made me laugh and cry and worry and beyond happy at the end. Thank you for a wonderful read.
nidszala chapter 19 . 6/15/2014
I really loved this story.
Its amazing and beautiful.
Can u do a sequel for this story?
I would love to read it.
Thanx for this awesome story
Guest chapter 19 . 5/20/2014
Liked it
Novel's addict chapter 19 . 4/23/2014
I absolutely loved it , wow amazing plot i really wish you would continue it and make a sequel
muffinmom chapter 19 . 1/17/2014
Thanks for sharing your story, I enjoyed listening to it with my voicedream app.
twiFan-1234 chapter 7 . 11/22/2013
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StupidLambTanya chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
I enjoyed your story, thank you!
Caz1105 chapter 19 . 9/22/2013
Excellent xxx
Caz1105 chapter 11 . 9/22/2013
Loving your story for the third time.
dbpbatm chapter 19 . 9/22/2013
Fun read! Thank you for sharing it.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/29/2013
dont get me wrong it was well written. But its obvious that you are a "team edward" person. And making jacob the horrible vile sadistic person you did, in my opinion was just wrong. Jacob would never hurt bella in such a discusting way no matter how much power he had as alpha.
Anonymous chapter 19 . 8/18/2013
Wow. I LOVED your story! I really liked that one line: "it's ok to be afraid. Fear means you have something to live for"
Maybe you could do a story about after bella is changed? I love your writing, and can't wait to hear more!
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