Reviews for Mistaken Vows
Katherine Rosalie Hale chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
Oui. Didn't see that coming!'ve got to update soon!
Kolored chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
Awesome chapter. This story is off to a great start. :)

Update soon,

SukiYo1910 chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
omg... poor edward! The not is back...must resist tears...not resisting well...NO! Something tells me it was Jacob...And she mentioned Edward...and he got pissed...and then she became the second emily...but thats just a theory...UPDATE SOON!
TallestBlue chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
NotSoSuperGirl chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
this is really good, POST ASAP
TallestBlue chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This is very interesting I LOVE IT
Rachel Rabbitt chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
If this story doesn't get happier, I'm going to have to kill you. You're an amazing author though! Excellent story. :] Kudos.
IPreferVerticallyChallenged chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
Is she engaged to Jake? Hurry up and update!
SukiYo1910 chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
omg i wanna strangle that damn nurse. this is really good keep writing!
SukiYo1910 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
wow...ur good...i have a not in my throat like when i resist crying...Jeez, if Stephenie Meyer needs a succesor you should be the first on the list...
Salted Top Hat chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
I think Bella's hiding something, I just know these things! WRITE MORE! D
DCoD chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
Yay, she's awake!

Boo to the rest of it. Either she's making it up or there's something fishy going on about it. And... that makes me wonder how she did end up in such a state moreso than ever before. Because of that 'He's... away on business. Unreachable.' line...

I'm dying of curiosity.. please, more soon! :D
MickeyandMinnie chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
Engaged? NO! Tell me she is just lying to him so she wouldn't seem pathetic. But, then, why wasn't her window open when he checked on her before? She couldn't have really moved on, right? I need to hear Bella's POV so I know what is really going on! Update soon!
BookishQua chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
This is interesting. I like the engagement twist. Something you might want to keep in mind for future chapters is that the sense of hearing is the last one to go - it is completely possible that she could have heard every word said in her room when she was in a coma. If she's really not engaged, you could have her insist she's engaged because she heard the "If you don't want her" conversation between Alice and Edward.
SparklingTopazEyes chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
No! Bella can't be engaged! Update soon! I can't wait to find out all what happened to her!
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