|Reviews for Mistaken Vows|
| littlejuliz chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
keep going what happend to bella?
| King'Kong'Quisha chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
That was Brilliant! Please continue.. i want to find out what happens next. :P
| Nekowingusu chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
You should really finish this fanfiction. It's a really great idea. Its well written, and unlike a lot of authors I've read, there isn't a ton of bad spelling.
| xsarahskankx chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Yes. You should most definitely continue because your fics are absolutely amazing, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm thinking maybe Victoria did this to Bella? But then again you'd think that they would be able to tell if it was a vamp attack, and she probably couldn't handle the blood. Either way I'm completely stoked to read on!
| 19TopazAngel18 chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
omg. so sad! great story! cant wait to read more!
| Lynnliz13 chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
ohh, i like this. VERY interesting. wow.
the only thing, really, is that in the beginning of the chapter, when edward first finds out about bella... idk, his response seems a little out of character. i think he'd be more inclined to describe the utter pain and misery washing through him, as he figured out exactly what happened to bella with one glance at his solemn face. shouting just doesn't seem like his forte to me.
oh, and maybe you'll want to put you author's note at the bottom in bold font or something. or at least have some kind of division there. right now it sortof seems like part of the story, especially because he's saying how it's all his fault and then YOU ask for forgiveness.
btw, i don't know anything about medicine either, so whatever you say i'll probably accept. ;]
| SparklingTopazEyes chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
Interesting story! I can't wait to find out what happened to Bella! I have an idea of what happened, but I'm not sure. Update soon!
| JadeJeronimo chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
I like this story!