|Reviews for Helping Out|
| SexyBeast17 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
love it more please.
| amybelikov1 chapter 3 . 12/13/2012
Well I like ur stories I have read all the twilight ones. Cause I loved twilight but I mist say they leave me a little Hot and Bother ...I must be some kinky bitch cause ur stories are Fucking HOT
| 7 Ace chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
I love this? Are you willing to write more on it?
| Jasper22 chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
I have to say this wasn't a bad story, this was actually quite good! I think the length was just fine and the smut was great. The only problem I have is that the characters seemed to shift/change slightly. They're first time together both Edward and Emmett felt very nervous and almost anxious. This time Emmett was much more in command and pushy, almost bordering bossy. He even rushed things when it came to the anal which most certainly was not like the first time. Just what I gathered from the story, take it or leave it...all in all very good job though!
| woo chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
emmett needs to get fucked!
| Stormshadowfire chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
my that was interesting i loved it
| Stormshadowfire chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
i though it was hot hot hot
| Panda Ravenstorm chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
I like the 2nd & 3rd better.
Nd in ur description paragraph thingy at the endof
the 3rd story, you said, "And with all the complaints..."
Y would anyone complain about ur stories?
I think ur stories are perfect. _
| nanavette chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
That was yummy.
| SexyEmmett chapter 3 . 4/1/2010
God all of it was hot! I stayed hard the whole story! And I came once every chapter!
| jazmine chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
omg u should go further with this storie
| swimerdude932011 chapter 3 . 3/2/2010
good story but you really need to work on your word choice. plus try defining which characters are saying what because i got a little confused in the third chapter, but i eventually figured it out. But you want to make your writing more clear so that the reader knows exactly who is say what exspecially in a hot story like this.
| eric chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
This was amazing and so wounderfully sumutty can u rite more plese
| Kerrfrano chapter 2 . 1/20/2010
WOW ... When is Emmett going to bottom? He wanted it in the first chapter
| Lambertxxx chapter 3 . 12/21/2009
Another one of your HOT stories that always leaves my crotch larger!