Reviews for Please Don't Do This
Aloha.Laney chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
I'm not sure if I missed anything, but I might have difficulties to understand it... After I read it twice...

This doesn't mean it's bad! I think it's very well written and realistic... oh well...

But I think it's also kinda sad and a bit mysterious(?).

Nevertheless, nice work!

[Anyway, your (author-) name means at the moment "A fight can a lifetime". If it should mean "A fight can last a lifetime", then it has to be "Ein Kampf kann eine Lebenszeit dauern" or instead of dauern: andauern or fortdauern. (All three mean the same)

Just thought I'd let you know ;-) (I'm German...)]
Kuro Garyuu chapter 2 . 10/11/2008
What happens? I wanna know what happens! Please update! :)
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