Wow. This is really beautiful. You say so much in so few words - I love the first person POV, the "will" tense; it adds a sense of confident mystery, if that makes sense. xD Anyway, really nicely done, great writing!

- Kitty

This makes me go "Aw." It's a nice feel good fic, but a bit short. Then again, you did say it was experimental. Anyway, I liked it.

Twilight Rurouni

Experimental or not, I really liked this piece. Eliwood and Ninian are such a sweet couple and I like you stayed true to Ninian's character. They have such a lovely innocence and seriousness to them at the same time. Anyway, this is nicely done. _

~Starlight