|Reviews for Waxing Crescent|
| Kenzersmom chapter 37 . 6/21/2010
wow you are good. this story was so great! i love your nessie and jacob. Nessie is a wonderful character you made her even better then bella ever could be and i really mean it. I loved jacob in the story too. Glad you put the humor of Jacob in the story making him true to character loved his comment on the beach about betting nessie she was concieved on the beach... You kept edward true to character and i can see why nessie would want to get away from him. Bella was Bella.
you put SM to shame and i really mean it. I love N&W it was snarky and hot, but this story was even better to me.
thanks for the story! thanks for writing it! i have enjoyed it and wished i could write like that!
| Kenzersmom chapter 33 . 6/21/2010
ok you did it again the stupid bella gene came out in nessie. i knew it! i really really hate the stupid bella gene, but you made her good combination of bella and edward like she should be. gotta go read
| Kenzersmom chapter 31 . 6/21/2010
that was hot! thanks for making jacob a somewhat gentleman by not taking her in the closet! wow... but trouble is ahead i can tell you won't let thinks end simply yet!
| Kenzersmom chapter 29 . 6/21/2010
wow i think i enjoy nessie/jacob hottness over bella/edward hottness and that's saying something. i really really like jacob now! again it's a great story. i still think the dumb bella gene is going to come out soon...
| Kenzersmom chapter 25 . 6/21/2010
ok i needed tissues before but now i need the box. that was the best closure anyone could get when someone dies without warning. how beautiful. you wrote nessie to be so loving and giving it is wonderful how you developed her. she is an grand blending of bella and edward. you are a very good writer. WOW!
| Kenzersmom chapter 24 . 6/21/2010
thanks for not taking that other chapter too far i don't think i could have taken it. WOW! you are such a great writer. i need tissues. you write so well i can feel the emotions! you are wondrful
| Kenzersmom chapter 22 . 6/21/2010
i knew it the stupid bella gene came out! she is in a pickle now. i hope nothing too bad happens to her.
| Kenzersmom chapter 21 . 6/21/2010
ok he is up there with james. EVIL. i can see that stupid bella gene coming out in nessie soon i know it. she is going to go by herself to "save" her family. i can feel it.
| Kenzersmom chapter 18 . 6/21/2010
ok she better not have inherited bella's gene of not telling anyone about the danger she is in or i will have cow. you are tangling it up good can't wait to read more.
| Kenzersmom chapter 11 . 6/21/2010
wow you can feel the chemistry. like how you wrote that. good to see jake happy for once.
| Kenzersmom chapter 9 . 6/21/2010
i sense there is going to be trouble. she seems to have that bella stupid gene. i thougth maybe she wouldn't inherit it. she also inherited her bad luck gene too. come on jake we need you!
| Kenzersmom chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
interesting story. Renesmee's is pretty cool. wow seeing your parent have sex, but not the first time... good to see edward and bella still have it in them. It is strange that jacob left it thought it caused some kind of pain emotionally to him to be away from her? also find it strange that they didn't tell her about jacob's imprinting?
can't wait to find out
| Pomporin300 chapter 28 . 5/17/2010
Woah! That was a bloody scene you write! I mean, I got a severe nosebleed here!
| scrapalicious chapter 37 . 5/6/2010
Loved it...even the cliff at the end. Perfect story.
| scrapalicious chapter 33 . 5/6/2010
Can you say STUPID! I've never wanted to slap someone so bad...Nessie will be the death of EVERYONE!