Reviews for Love of a Spartan
Guest chapter 20 . 7/9
It made me cry. Best fanfic ever.
CinnabonNinja chapter 1 . 5/19
Liked this story, read After the War as well.
IansInsane chapter 4 . 5/10
I like this. This is pretty good.
silverknight117 chapter 14 . 4/27
What the fuck? Your characters and their actions are beyond fucking stupid.
Anonymous chapter 49 . 4/21
Please continue this, please...
activemars828 chapter 29 . 4/11
Damn it Troy, why do you always lie?! One of these days you're going to lie to someone as stubborn as you are and I don't do bits and pieces!
Mythix999 chapter 14 . 12/13/2014
Also, I'm pretty sure John with his enhanced eyesight and stuff would have absolutely no problem spotting a camo Elite - no matter how advanced the shielding. After all, Captain Keyes could, and so did Spartans, in the books. It would, also show up on his radar and the footsteps are probably audible. Also why the ploy to kill John using Renee if it is as simple as cutting his throat in sleep?

Oh well FANFIC so yeaaa keep it up!
Mythix999 chapter 12 . 12/13/2014
Hey there! I really like your story and the way you write, the pace is great and keeps the reader engaged. Absolutely fabulous work! A couple of points though - do check out the Halo universe since some stuff is inconsistent with the actual books and games, Spartans can't reproduce, and they don't have a sex drive haha, in addition to the fact that the military uses "Bravo" and "Tango" as their alphabet, not the Greek letters of "Beta" and "Theta".

Nevertheless this is fanfic, so you're free to say that this is how it works in your universe. Keep up the great writing!
DawnofShadows256 chapter 49 . 11/15/2014
This is,by far, my favorite halo book EVER! You are a great writer so keep it up. You had me crying at all the sad parts and laughing at the funny ones. That's something that most book writers NEVER can make me do. Once again, loved it!
Guest chapter 28 . 9/18/2014
Amazing story and one of the few I read. Very enjoyable but also there are problems like Master Chief and Renee's relationship. When i was a army cadet me and my girlfriend had no time to ourselves, and in a war for survival the rules would be even tighter. Queen of Asgard, who says the UNSC even use US Army rankings? Personally, I find British rank systems easier. Twinkie216, if you find Halo and it's backstory difficult I'm happy to help. Messages over so yeah. Shame you can't make part 3 AB
pjmb13 chapter 47 . 4/19/2014
Just want to say I really enjoyed your story.
chase chapter 14 . 12/27/2013
now i know im being just damn nit pickey but wow, amy and the elite? chatting? the obscenity is ammusing of nothing else. kind of would make better sence after the human-elite alliance. that way theres more hope of winning and its not a majoe bogging down.
chase chapter 12 . 12/27/2013
wow...that first line threw me for a loop. still a good love story, just i know that this would never happen between soldiers. its all professional and they cant afford to risk lives with distractions. still a very fun read
chase chapter 11 . 12/27/2013
so far i love the story, only i wish it wasn't john, some other un named spartan because i just cant see john doing this. he is a hard ass to the core and not a softie. pluss wheres cortana? a good series jst two or four things that really prevent me from loving t\it
XLil MEkoX chapter 47 . 12/3/2013
You! You you you you YOU!
You! Have slapped me upside the head with these damn FEELS! UGH! Great T.T
I love this, I love Halo, I love John and Renee! GAH i love you! XD
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