|Reviews for The Moutain|
| Dancing Feather chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Never say your story is pointless! You lose potential readers that way!
Because you are writing for an English audience, it's better that you have the translation. I think it's cool that someone wrote some fanfiction that didn't involve any of the characters directly. It's rare to find good scenery fics.
However, we all know not all demons are horrible creatures! Since this is in 3rd person, it would make a nice twist to the story. Ignorant humans may think the place as godly, but that's just their opinion is it?
Also, stories less than 1,0 words long you will want to label as a drabble in the summary so people will have an easier time finding your story.
| Silent Scribe chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
A solid shot at foreshadowing, but I think it could have been stretched into a story. Not bad since there is a direction to the meandering. :)