Reviews for You Better Go Now
Julsgracie chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
That was really sweet. Great description of emotions.
Tatsuhiko Serena chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Oh my!

I rly loved your fic!

I want to ask u if I can put it in portuguese.

Do you mind?

Sry for my not so good english "
Countess Rivers chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Loved this! You really captured the feel of such an encounter. Please do the vampire Edward one, although, of course he would be a typical Edwardian gentleman and not be groping things, but probably being angsty about what he'd like to do if he weren't such a gentleman!
yourgreeneyes chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Aw, it was so sweet! And fluffy... Please do the other one too!
Countrygal17 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
THAT WAS SO GOOD! Oh the irony Bella is the one that wants to wait instead of Edward! I love the way you wrote it, i could actually see it happening! You should do one where Edward is a vampire, but they probably wouldn't be able to get as close as they got in this, because he would be extra careful, and it probably wouldn't be after prom lol but I can't wait to read it!
Hymnophile chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I'd love to read it w/vamp Edward. And in his point of view? Even better.

xx-make sure you really describe how conflicted his thoughts are :)