I like this fanfiction because of the Chomper and Ruby romance.

I call that a happy ending.

Nice...

That was pretty abrupt(referring to the ending). Is Strut dead or something? Nobody heard from him again after he was knocked unconscious by the flyer. Also, i'm not happy with the way you killed off Sierra, I was hoping he'd atleast kill somebody or go down in a better way. I also don't like how you killed off Ozzy, that was a bit uncalled for. Also: RORY IS A BOY?

Fantastic! I was wondering earlier while reading Bad To The Beak Part 2 why Rinkus and Sierra were being friendly. This has been put together really well. Also, whats a longtail? You called Rita that when she got up to take a sip of water, lol. Anyways, you made Rinkus and Sierra great villians, they have pretty much no redeeming traits at all.

Oh yeah, I also like how you made out Sharptooth to be tougher than Doc. I love Sharptooth, i'm glad you could bring him into this awesome fanfiction.

You did a FANTASTIC job with the saga, I think this is the best part of any fanfiction i've ever read. In just five short (well not really) chapters, you were able to bring a lot of understanding between the sharpteeth and the flatteeth, and in the end of it all, managed to reform Redfoot without killing him. Congratulations.

I was thinking "Oh my god, you had Redclaw kill off Sharptooth, WHY?!". I actually skipped over the part with Icky being tied up to see what happened to them afterwards, nice job. Although I did suspect that Doc's bloody leg had something to do with the blood on the rock.

I really like what you did with Sharptooth, I wish more fanfictions had him in it, he's by far my favorite character, and probably one of my most, if not THE most favorite character/s of mine. The best thing I like about him in this is how plays the role of the leader of everyone, and he deserves it. He's by far the toughest Therapod in any movie i've seen so far.

What about the Plated Sharptooth from the 5th movie? The one that fought Chomper's parents. Shouldn't he be alive too, if Sharptooth got to be alive? I don't have any ideas for any of this, but you also have the two main antagonists from the 4th movie to work with. Theres alot that can still be added!

OMFG MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE! :D

its a massive mhite need some more intresting whords next time.

If I was in land before time I would be a rex like sharptooth

it is boring

This story seems to have a very slow pace.