Reviews for Bella's Secret
Paul'sWolfGirl2016 chapter 7 . 1/21
uh just to point out vampire venom is lethal to wolves so if Bella is a Wolf who got bitten by James then she should of died! also her knowing that phasing was a possibility it was pretty stupid of her to get involved with the Cullens to begin with don't you think?
milagglad chapter 25 . 12/5/2016
TinaF chapter 25 . 6/26/2016
Loved it!
Pale chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
It is mentioned a ton in the books, how Bella is "as pale as a vampire", and Jacob is like a warm mocha. I find it highly doubtful that she would have two Quileute parents. Simple genetics wouldn't allow her to be their daughter unless she is an albino. If you want her to be Billy and Sarahs daughter then you should clearly state why she is so pale, because even if she avoided the sun her whole life, she would still have some color. Besides that the concept is okay.

And why would they give up one of their children...not their first but their third of four, it makes no sense.
andrewpine chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
Think i will pass and go look for a better written story.
Brunettesmurf chapter 14 . 9/17/2015
You have to fly to Italy because it is a country and across the ocean.
Steph A15 chapter 26 . 6/6/2015
I really liked the story :)
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 9 . 12/10/2014
ooooh yeah!
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
oh no! or oh yeah?!
jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 26 . 10/16/2014
Fancyunicorn chapter 8 . 9/26/2014
Guest chapter 26 . 9/21/2014
Guest chapter 26 . 6/26/2014
Great story!
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