|Reviews for Bella's Secret|
| TinaF chapter 25 . 6/26
| Pale chapter 1 . 6/25
It is mentioned a ton in the books, how Bella is "as pale as a vampire", and Jacob is like a warm mocha. I find it highly doubtful that she would have two Quileute parents. Simple genetics wouldn't allow her to be their daughter unless she is an albino. If you want her to be Billy and Sarahs daughter then you should clearly state why she is so pale, because even if she avoided the sun her whole life, she would still have some color. Besides that the concept is okay.
And why would they give up one of their children...not their first but their third of four, it makes no sense.
| andrewpine chapter 1 . 4/7
Think i will pass and go look for a better written story.
| Brunettesmurf chapter 14 . 9/17/2015
You have to fly to Italy because it is a country and across the ocean.
| Steph A15 chapter 26 . 6/6/2015
I really liked the story :)
| jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 9 . 12/10/2014
| jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
oh no! or oh yeah?!
| jaylene.olebar.3 chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
I love it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
I HATE THIS STORY
| asia.joanna.7334 chapter 26 . 10/16/2014
| Fancyunicorn chapter 8 . 9/26/2014
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/21/2014
| Guest chapter 26 . 6/26/2014
| Clace Bedward Lover chapter 26 . 12/29/2013
Is there more?
| Miss.SummerLynnWhitlock chapter 26 . 11/10/2013
Awesome story! Loved it ! :)