Reviews for Trying So Hard
Reelyrandom1 chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Wow! I really liked the part how you explained the origin of Inner Sakura. It fit so well with the actual story, like Kishimoto Masashi wrote it himself! The only part that was a bit iffy was how Sasuke acted. Just a little out of character, but it with the way the story was going, it would be hard to keep him in character while telling Sakura that her new self was better. Excellent work! :)
xoxo Juniebug chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
the beginning was really good! the end felt all mushy and OOC, sasuke would never say that. fortunately, your amazing writing skills dull the 'cringe factor'.