|Reviews for Fan and Flute|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25
Worst story ever
| VolcanicDust1501 chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
| lemon-rind chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
| Halan Lore chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Well Temari has her 'I shall kick your butt with a fan' attitude. So rocks! -nosebleed-
| MistressDeidara chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
LOL. Nice. Short, sweet, and to the point-but still entertaining. I was referred to this little one-shot by a friend/fellow reviewer, and I must say-I'm not sorry that I clicked the link. You did well with this. 'Adds to favorites' Sheesh...now I might actually end up writing a fic for that pairing. Ah, well. Not like that's a BAD thing-I just have another story at the moment. I'll come up with something once I'm done. Later.
| Haraio chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
In my opinion, Tayuya should be the dominant, but oh well I guess that's just because I like Tayuya so much Anyway, well done with this one shot, and I hope you will continue with it It could be very interesting
| Kami-Inu chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
LOL. This was pretty good, for a one shot. And I've NEVER heard of this pairing, so of course I had to check it out. Not disappointed. (yeah, Yuri fan, and I'm a girl. Go figure.) Anyways, as for Tayuya being the uke...maybe because it's funnier? I mean, I always see her as acting hard and swearing like a sailor, so it's...interesting to think of someone tough like that being dominated by a more feminine character. (NOTE: feminine just means more womanly, NOT tra-la-la girly-girl. Temari is badass in her own right.) Anyways...good job. .
| Rohain Tahquil chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
| inuyouko chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
even though it was hard to write it was a decent one shot keep at it and improve and you will make it on to my favorites
| Thorn In Your Side chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
*chuckles* i don't know either.
i nearly pissed myself laughing at that. way. to. GO!
see? nagging works.
temari as seme makes it funnier. seriously, good job with this. the shortness is of no matter. *beams*
| Cricket-The-Duck chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
If all else fails in your future career, write porn. Seriously.
You did a good job on this dude!