Reviews for Taking A Queen
ghost.of.ravenclaw.tower chapter 1 . 4/1
Dear God, that made me laugh. I'm going to check out your other work, if they're half as funny as that you might be a new favourite author (up there with the great Molly Raesley). Yeah, a little bit filthy-minded in pla es but what's RLSB without a decent chunk of innuendo?! Loved the way you wrote the characters here, though I'm sure you've stopped checking the reviews for this by now:)
brokentoysarenofun chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
I love stories like this with the emphasis on banter and innuendo :) Very RemusSirius!

Are you not writing anymore? It would be a shame, your fics are good...

xxxx
Samwise chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Funny. The banter was well written, which isn't always the case in fanfiction. Keep up the good work!
yeahwhateverkid chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
clever. loved all the banter and the bits of sexual tension. very enjoyable.

[Remus couldn’t help staring at the little bit of pale, suggestively hairy skin that was exposed as Sirius stretched, a sneaky smile still plastered to his face. When Sirius waved his hand in front of his stomach, a startled Remus looked at Sirius’s face and realised what he’d been doing. For the umpteenth time that night, Remus felt his cheeks grow hot as he blushed profusely. Sirius had the nerve to smirk and wink at him.] - nice. ;]

[“Oh, yeah, sure. Of course. You should. We should. Get to bed, I mean. Separately, of course! Don’t forget to brush your teeth, and stuff…” Remus smiled shyly. He wondered how many people had ever made the Great Sirius Black babble.] - cute. :]

great work.
Elvish-Princess99 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
More innuendo than a Carry On- although it was a damn sight more subtle. And enjoyable.
Lady Annikaa chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
It was so cute and sweet! Loved the banter! .
2Padfoot00Moony7 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I love this story D

With all the little snide remarks and such ] And them falling other and scrabbling over chess pieces is very Maraduer-like xD

Amazing!

,Paddy
FullMoonDreams chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Cute story. I liked the banter between the boys.

You do have quite a few typos in the story though, so you might want to consider having another read through of it and/or getting a beta to check it out in order to polish it up a little. It is a shame to have the typos take away from the fic.
albe-chan chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
I LOVED it. Effing adorable...

And I heart innuendo. YAY!

I hope sirius gets to take the queen on a regular basis. *wink*
Angel Of Noctem chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Goodie :)
SiriusScruffy chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
This review should make your whole year I enjoyed it so much. Lol
ProtegoNox chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Haha, loved it! It was very entertaining, and their innuendos are such blatant flirting, it is amazing they didn't just throw the board to the side like Sirius had been thinking! :)
lachambre11 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Very cleverly constructed and sweet. I give it a 13 out of 10.

D
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
This is definitely my favourite one of your fics. Unlike most of your other stories, this doesn't rely almost completely on dialogue to move itself along; the descriptions of thoughts and actions were very good. As a lover of innuendoes, I found a few of the lines very clever. Also, I thought it was amusing that James and Lily turned out to be the couple kissing in the corner.

Just one thing you might want to change: "When the couples’ hands, however, began sliding underneath of blouses" It shouldn't say "blouses" because only girls wear them, and for a moment I thought if they were both wearing blouses then the couple consisted of two girls.
The Mills Apocrypha chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Lovely story. I love the bantering between them all and the chess fight, altho one in the eye must knacker.

Its good that it was a gradual thing between them too, all that barely disguised sexual tension...phew!
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