|Reviews for Sand Into Soil|
| Renn chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Ooooohhh...loved it! really, very much in character, and it's just awesome!
| Luna Embry chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I'd classify this story as a definite favorite of mine. I absolutely love the relationship between Muarim and Tormod and you display it very effectively. Muarim and Tormod deserve more stories like this! :)
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Hi there, Black Light Princess! Gunlord from the little circle of reviewyness here There are just a few lil' changes of awkward word choice I'd make here...
should be Tellians, with a capital T
I think you mean mind-*boggling* XD
Those are the only changes I'd make, at least from just a quick lil' glance over the chapter Anyways, this was a really nice fic! Both Tormod and Muarim were in-character, and their interaction was nice. I'm glad to have read it, keep up the good work! :D
| tiger002 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I liked it and gives the look into the past of Tormod and Muriam. There is so much that could be written into the relationship that is seen in the games.
| haretikers chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
i think is nice how muarim wants to act like a beorc around tormod so that the fire-mage remains familiar with the beorc ways.
| WayToDawn chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Oh, slice of life!
Writing FE now, hn? What's next, ToS? (Do not take that seriously, Axel. Really.)
Interesting choice of characters. Interesting way to handle them too; ambiguous. Are you being cautious now? Either way, it turned out quite well. A bit of slice of life with a strong background of wishful thinking. I specially liked thinking of what's ahead of them in game canon, and the reference to Reyson. xD
| Shadow Hylian chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
I really liked this one-shot. The characterisation of both Tormod and Muarim are just right, and I think that the interaction between the two of them is well done.
Overall, great work.