|Reviews for Erotica|
| Anonomys chapter 1 . 7/19
Kinda cut the fucking short.
| Mine ShadowMaster chapter 1 . 5/3
LOL it sounds good to ME too! *-* 3
| synchro chapter 1 . 3/23
Hahaha this was awesome
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
Bravo! Loved the character development ;)
| LadyPeanutButter chapter 1 . 1/17
That line to end the story- loved it, looooooovvved it! :D
| Taku chaan chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T END IT THERE ! AAAAAARRGGG I WILL DIE !
I was craving for the passionate lemon between the two here! lol. The final is just SO F*CKIN EXCITING!..I love their ''indirect'' conversation, revealing gradually how they feel and how much they desire each other *.*
That was so enthralling, so good to read! Sasuke's struggling with his lustful thoughts of Naruto, and Naruto's final paper so emotional ! Omg !
The moment when he got furious at sasuke, saying ''That's hokage sama to you, Uchiha-san" I must admit I wanted sasuke to beat him up ! lol. But the reason behind his reaction calmed me down and the following part did the rest...
I really reaaally loved the idea of both of them conveying their feelings by stories *.*
| godess bubbles chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Love it! I love how Naruto tops Sasuke!
| ChasesTheMoon chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Omfg why did it stop I mean it worked but I wasn't ready for the end I was ready for steamy hot sex! Anyway really loved this sad with the abrupt end but still super good anywho ttyl
all way watchin chase
| Albewt chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Freakin' puuurfect. Thank you for this!
| NavyHuskie chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
really nice one well detailed and fun to read hope to see more from you
| FreakyFee94 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
I love it! :D It was hot and awesome! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
The idea for this fic was very clever! I like how Sasuke first communicated his feelings through his revisions to Naruto's story, and how Naruto ended up explaining his point of view through the second story he wrote. We got Naruto's perspective that way pretty effectively, even though the story was written in Sasuke's POV.
But LOL! The porn Sasuke wrote was pretty amateurish ("the black haired male," "the blond," "soon to be lover"). Tsk, tsk, and he complained about Naruto being a bad writer. Sasuke was certainly more detailed, but his prose wasn't any better than Naruto's. Oh well, I guess being a virgin had something to do with it. Hopefully the next time will be much more convincing, now that he's had some experience. ;D
| cellaria chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
what's there is cute ...but seems rushed at the end & incomplete with all the lead up & no sex or anything..
| Vogue chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
It was one of the best written, most erotic stories I ever red...
..but why is there no SEX?-pout-
| figgyleaf chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Awwww wish this was longer great though!