Reviews for When the Past Comes Back
My-Room-Is-My-Retreat chapter 2 . 11/23/2009
AW! this is SO good! you should finish it. )
Not A FanFictioner Anymore chapter 2 . 10/20/2008
YAY! FINNALY UPDATED! I loved it! UPDATE SON! AND MORE DANNYALLYFLUFF PLEASE!
disneyqueen chapter 2 . 10/20/2008
Hi

I love this chapter. Just a little tip, you might try to work on more detail like what they're wearing in, how tense or afraid they are, without just saying it. Other than those tips, i REALLY LIKE IT.

Update soon

D-Queen
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
OOH! Awesome!

The rewrite just keeps getting better and better! Absolutely brilliant!

Danny loves Allyson so much... AH! I LOVE THEM! *U*

Rock on! I can't WAIT to see what happens next! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Dude, this revamp rocked! _ Your writing has definitely gotten better since 'Gotta Deal'! U

I loved the ending line, and the indication that this was no ordinary storm. Also, the little fact of Allyson and Danny falling in love was an AWESOME bonus, too! Honestly, how can you NOT love those two together! *U*

Rock on! I can't WAT for the next update! U *U*

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
disneyqueen chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Hi

This is really great. Longer chapters always a plus and I can really see you getting better. Great job. Update like now! PLEASE I feel so bad for Allyson and Danny, but that's what makes the story so great. UPDATE LIKE NOW! PLEASE

D-Queen
StarlightNinjaThief chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
plz continue
Not A FanFictioner Anymore chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
YAY! I LOVED IT!