Reviews for Unintended
Jmg94 chapter 1 . 8/26
That was hot and I would definitely like a continuation of the story
Haruko92 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
I know its been a while since you posted this. But I would love to see more. I alos agree that Sai is bottom. I could never for the life of me being seme. Hes too cute, and fucken perfect for Naruto! I always picture Sai going through a pregnancy. Idk. Lol. I think his body would be suited. Even though he is male. Anyway. I hope to see more!
My Solitude chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
This is kind of funny. XD
LadyZhen chapter 1 . 1/31/2011

I liked this storyy.. U shuld maaake more of SaiNaru fics...
purplexninjaxdragon chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
heheh, poor Sai...his first time and he's the uke...make more?
Weird Kunoichi chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Ohh I liked this one! Mmm.. Sai.. lol. He is such a uke! Am sure glad Sakura didn't get any! hahaha. Man are you pretty graphic or er detailed! haha Sphincter? Why didn't you just put "ass" lol! Sphincter only made it sound funnier.. hahaha.. Like almost every time I got "excited" the word sphincter popped up and I lost my girly boner! T_T lol! kidding!
PhreshxxxBear chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Damn, you should have definiately continued this story! it was awesome! I would have love to have a Sai mpreg
Melanie chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I love this story! It's been saved to my favorites list. Please, oh please continue writing! I'd love to read it as an Mpreg, too!
Addiena-Saffir chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
This was good lemony yaoi, the best kind. Don't worry about your perverted mind your among many of your kind here. Mwahahahaha
Ibbited chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Yeah Sai just fits better at the bottom. haha. If you add to this and make Sai prego, luck. I probably wont read it though.

Sai's little hatred over the toy was amusing and something that was even better was the use of chakra. Ive read NO story involving that and Ive been waiting for it forever. (now if only I could find a shika one like it..) The mating mark was rather awesome as well and Im wondering: it real? Me and my noob-ness. Sorry D: But yeah! Loves :)

Luck writing. Keep on!

Belle Mort 13 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009


I love this story

Finaly a truly wonderfully writen Naruto/Sai

[perverted giggle]


PLEASE make this a full-length story


PLEASE [insert a thousand million more please's]


Blessed Be

from Belle M
K.S.T.M chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
OMG, Update Please!xD it's really good, and i would like to read more!XD
sakurakamikaze chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Must continue on this story. who told you to stop? I love it!
Savannah chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I love your stories! They're amazing. Keep writing, you amazing author, you.
Fire x Ice chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I liked it, it was cute and Sai was wonderful!
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