Reviews for Absence
Stalker of Stories chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
That was so great! I really love how you portrayed the gap in their lives :) Sure, Roxas only knew the programmed versions, but you could TELL they were aware somewhere in the backs of their minds, y'know? Great one-shot!

The Blue Girl chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Haven't read anything good lately and this was such a fresh read that I wish it wasn't so freaking cold and snowing so I could go sit on my roof [which I can! (:] and watch everything. Yeah, cheesy and what-not but great for angsty inspiration. It was like, they were almost there but not quite fulfilled with what they had. I loved it.
Besieged Infection chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Beautifully written. Just... wow... You did it, yet again.
Kuko-chan chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
This was a wonderful little piece! I admit, I didn't quite feel emotional until that last line "I miss you, man." There was something so tragic about that line and I actually started to tear up. Very thoughtful and sad.
GinaBreez chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I should say I hate you becasue you made me cry, but I have to thank you for writing this fic.

I know that people always look at how Roxas was after leaving them, but no one really stops to think about how the others mush be feeling. They were 'best friends' and ever if it WAS all fabracated by Diz, it will still show through. I fav this a thousand times over.

Tina ~VI~
hintcoin chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
i am angry, for now i must stop from crying!

there...there are no words to describe this...

SO MUCH TEEN ANGST! is so beautiful and unbearable...

it hurts so good to read this...

*sniffles* i'm favoriting
TectonicPlatez chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I feel like I'm about to cry XD

This really captures what I was looking for! I wanted to notice Roxas's friends' feelings after he dissapeared. I loved how you based it mainly off of Hayner.

The way you wrapped up the end with Sora made me really sad (and I rarely cry, so...)

redleaveshavefallen chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
This is really touching. I absolutely loved it. It's a little unclear at times, but I love how you connect everything and how you describe everything, it's really, really sweet. I cried while reading it.
burned out from exhaustion chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Ah, my eyes are stinging! This was amazing. Really, really fantastic. Great job - I love it.
manhattan martini chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
This made me sniffle and cry my eyes out.

I adored it.

Great job.
Swing-21 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
So... heartbreakingly... beautiful.

I'm all teary-eyed now...
Summer Memory chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
You don't have any idea how you've made really happy reading this fic,do you.?

I cried at the prologue of kh2, cursing squenix for erasing roxas existence like that.. And i just happen to love the friendship of haynerxroxas,(not in that way,though) and this fic is kinda made up for it, telling about the trio in roxas' absence..I could feel my heart clench when reading it..Ah,just wonderful, I love it. A lot. LOVE~~ (forgive me for this piece of junk review..i'm not native to english..)
AkitoTsubaki chapter 1 . 3/27/2009

Poor Hayner. This was really heart-wrenching.
Orodruin chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
Awesome, I loved it. It was so sad, captures a lot of the sadness I felt when Roxas disappeared in the game. I went back to Twilight Town way more than was necessary just to indulge in the bittersweet memories... a little pathetic, maybe, but it was probably the saddest scene in a video game I've ever seen. And I love the way you capture the emotion in this.
crimson-obsidian-rose chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Oh wow, this is so amazing, so beautiful, so... sentimental. I love the emotions that are in here, the longing that Hayner feels, and Olette and Pence too, for someone that they don't even really know anymore. The way that Roxas' space is still there, even though he's not, it's how always felt like the Twilight Town gang will be after Roxas goes. He is more important to that group than most people realize, and it's nice to see how you captured the post-absence period of Roxas.

I especially loved the off-center photos, for some reason.

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