Reviews for Unwritten
JDH1080 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
i think it was good, and the age differnce, is not a big deal, its not like shes a couger, ive seen people get togher even though theres like a 15 year diffence,
shadowcatbrat918 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Really cute story! :)
Sidney Ella Ford chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Aw! So cute.
Ravenwolf of the Grave chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Aw, that was sweet.
angstyklainer chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Very cute! D
Ylva chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
You write good stories.
KittyScarlet chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Aw, this is cute. I'm not sure if Jake would act like that, even if he was 11, maybe if he were younger.
chimaera.xx chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
this story love

just thought you should know
xxTunstall Chickxx chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Very nice. Loved it, very cute. Adorable. The idea was very interesting and you pulled it off nicely.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx
perfectlovestory chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
OMG that was so cute. i loved it so much. keep up the great work :). YAY for Blackwater!
starrywolf274 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
well that was original. the age thing wasn't bad, it would have been more understandable if they were hanging out and not being babysat. i like that theory of why jacob hates sam though. and yet another way leah belongs with jake. blackwater *sigh*
koolioettetheweirdo chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
This is soo cute. I always thought they'd be so cute together. (:
Leiaaa chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
This is really cute! I love this. You did a great job!
xXxBANDxGEEKxXx chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
very cute...i usually hate Blackwater fics, but urz was actually really good. ]