|Reviews for untitled|
| dizzyizzy123 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
This really good. You should definitely continue it. You've captured the character's voices and my only issue is the lack of quotation marks ("") when characters speak as it's hard to distinguish dialog from thoughts.
| Madmanatlarge chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
It's pretty good xD
I have a problem with the whole Mikey Forrester part though, he's in a train station, lying on a matress reading porn? Isn't that illegal? And fairly easy to get caught?
Ack anyway, apart from that whole section is was good xD
Out of curiousity, are you from Scotland?