Reviews for Things We Said Before The Fire
CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
so so good. gah, gokudera can be a little clueless sometimes though. it's not quite gokuharu, no, (you're right, gokudera would hardly cooperate) but it's getting there, and i grin happily at the signs. :D
YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Oh, this was amazing. AMAZING. I love it! It's well-written, funny, touching, and you've got the characters down pat. I really feel like I got a good long look at the inside of canon Gokudera's head.
YingYang890 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This was amazingly well written! Great job and thanks for posting it up!
Shiki chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
D', in spite of Gokudera's foul mouth xD Written well too. Nicely done. Whay happens after would make a funny and heart-warming story, in my opinion. Good job _
smos chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I'm squinting, I'm squinting and I think I see it! :D
RoyaleDeuce chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Such a beautiful, well-written story. Amazing characterization. I love the gradual change of Gokudera's persepective on Haru. A sequel would be nice. :)
satomika chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
yeah...

that's right...

better than kyoko...

but oh...
I-ink chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
pure genius,really original please write more something like after war(impressive, you really keept them on their character )
Paris Lee isaw700yahoo.com chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Oh, my gosh...

This is the cutest, most heart-warming Gokudera-Haru story I've ever read. I love how you were able to keep them true to their character. It's such a beautiful story. I love you're writing style as well. Casual yet with substance. Is this really just a one-shot? (,)

More Gokudera-Haru, pretty pretty please? (,)
kimikissu07 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Cute story!
sheruchan chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Ooh, what a lovely idea. I always thought it'd be cute if Haru might develop feelings for someone other than Tsuna and I like how you toyed with the idea here a bit. As a previous reviewer said, I'm glad you didn't make it just fluffy romance, because that's just not how Gokudera rolls, haha. I enjoyed how you explored the more serious side of Haru here too. Really, great characterization for both characters and I especially loved the last sentence.
Cinnbun chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
aww its still as cute as when i read it on livejournal
yukari142 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
I really love you story! It's really a beautiful friendship ( I supposed) fic ( which is very rare, as most fics I've read tend to have them as couple (which, in some way, is not bad, but too much fics like that is ..uhm.. terrible :D). Anyway, I wanted to translate your fiction into Vietnamese and post it on my blog, of course the credit will be you as the original writer, and I will be responsible for the translation only. If you agree, please email me: . Have a good day.
derpinaderpherp chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
bravissimo!

characterization is spot-on my dear! you really did this pairing splendidly, because with gokudera, there really wont be fluffy-puff-marshmallow romance. i love how you portrayed Haru as more than the flighty, silly goose of a gal that so many have tagged her as.

:]
NaruSasuNS chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
oh god, it is gorgeous! You portray them so perfectly that I can see it happened in the manga D Uri is so cute, Haru is so caring, Hayato so rude but understanding... Ah, a perfect 5986 fic.

Thank and keep it up (There are not a lot Hayato/Haru moments, I hope to read more fics from you )
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