Reviews for Forgiven
KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Hmm, I like it!

Although the writing style seemed to change quite a lot around the middle,

it didn't stop being dark and touching and funny all at once.

I love the end too. :D

Good work!

The Other Romance chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Marik is like a child who is confuse as to how he should protect his light...he doesn't know how to do it so he ends up hurting his light...thanks I hope you add more chaps to ur story
Cliscia chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Unf. OTP, baby.

Anyway, nice, short, sweet, and to the point.

I love fics through Mariku's point of view~
Miyree chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Aww! It's really cute, I love it!
Journey Maker chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
I loved it.. You showed Marik to be not the crazy insane person but he really did care about Malik...