|Reviews for Forgiven|
| KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Hmm, I like it!
Although the writing style seemed to change quite a lot around the middle,
it didn't stop being dark and touching and funny all at once.
I love the end too. :D
| Ayotechnology chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Marik is like a child who is confuse as to how he should protect his light...he doesn't know how to do it so he ends up hurting his light...thanks I hope you add more chaps to ur story
| Cliscia chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Unf. OTP, baby.
Anyway, nice, short, sweet, and to the point.
I love fics through Mariku's point of view
| Miyree chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Aww! It's really cute, I love it!
| Journey Maker chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
I loved it.. You showed Marik to be not the crazy insane person but he really did care about Malik...