Reviews for Wake Up Sometime
verydeactivated chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
He's turning into Johnny... *evil laughter in backround*

great job, for a short one-shot!
trolololololololololololo chapter 1 . 7/29/2009

Squee's turning into Johnny, slowly but surely. *Evil grin*
tasty cheez chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Squee is the kinda character that is cute in a creepy kind of way, and you've made him creepy in a cute kinda way. Bravo. This is a great lil' fic 9/10.
Don't Use Anymore chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
An interesting look at Squee.
Raxzo chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I dunno, you're basically writing the events out, whereas Squee is barely involved at all.

What I mean is, don't just tell what happens in the story. Have the characters be part of it. Have them talk, or think, or some sort of action at all. Maybe Shmee's trying to comfort Squee, or the voice from next door actually formed words, or maybe Squee crawled out of bed and tried to huddle in a corner, or SOMETHING.

A good, meaningful action can make even the shortest of stories part of the greatest.