|Reviews for but it'll cost you|
| NeverlandsPiratePrincess chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
whats he gonna do try to kill a ghost
| LadyKate1 chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
That was beautifully written - very moving and, well ... haunting. (Even if I'm a Guy/Marian shipper who believes she would have learned to love him. LOL) Thank you for a great read.
| midnight-rose-lee chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This was such a charming entry. You have a gift for writing. Keep up the good work!
| bookishy chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
This was wonderful. Short, but expertly written and full of depth and a great understanding of grief and guilt. I really liked these lines: "It’s ironic, in a way. That she is sewn forever to his side, the way she ought to have been, unable to even be seen by the one he stole her from. He wishes he could enjoy it more."
I like how Guy even feels possessive of her ghost; it feels very genuine and human.
Really great job.
| magical-archer chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
heartfelt, cleverly written and sad. Nice work
| FreckledAdvocate chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
wonderful... kinda creepy, but good creepy. Well done. :)
| readeradv chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Evil GhostMarian rules!
Keep up the excellent work!
| DreamsofRay chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Wow!I like it, I like the way that she can be so cocky, so arragont with him now.
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Beautifully written, as always. So sad! I always love how you write these characters, thanks so much!