|Reviews for Why Women Can Impress Blue and Brown Dragons|
| Ravens Trinity chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Lived this! I have been looking for stories that deal weigh women impressing brown and bronze. Thanks!
| ME chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Absolutely fantastic! Closing lines couldn't be more perfect. Way to go!
| firedrakegirl chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
This was wonderful! I giggled at her reaction to waking with Omasuth on top of her. Wonderful story! Though, I'd love to see drabbles of the first female brown rider going through her training, and perhaps making the occasional bit of jewelry for her beauty. :D
| Musing Feather chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Very nice! I'll admit it was a bit confusing at times, due to so much information being packed into such a short piece, but otherwise I like this a lot. :D
| Pesti chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
What I really want to see is a male queen rider. That would set them in a tizzy, indeed!
This was very cute and funny. :D
| RuinofDarkness chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I loved it! I always wanted to see females on other dragons than just the green and golds...
| ISurvivedHurricaneIrma chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
A great story. Very good.
| Jayadragon chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
that is a great idea
thank you for writing this
hope more is added
| GinnyStar chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Bkon was a male green Search Dragon.
You got a year for a turn somewhere here too.
Overall good story. Something of a twist to impression, there is another one her with a girl impressing a brown at Fort Weyr.
Been wanting to read this first time I've got a change to read it.
| Diglossia chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I do like how you made Aoriya burly and masculine but your story could use some serious editing. The characterization of the brown was also fitting.
| Katescats chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
Hi just read your story it was very good.
| Kittisbat chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Oh, very nice! And the name Omasuth, how did you come up with that? Oh, but in the second to last paragraph you forgot to bold what he says. Still, it's wonderful!
| Pern Addict chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
First you said the first girl on blue was from Igen and later you said she was from Fort. Which one? I love the line "She ran into a brown dragon Master Oldive." There are some places where commas are missing, but overall, this is a funny story. I'd be happy to beta for you
| Brownriderco chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
This is an intriguing premise. The writing seems technically proficient. Did notice a small format error, but it is consistant throughout the piece, so I shan't quibble. Ms McCaffrey has stated that a blue could impress to a female. It's not likely but it could happen, even if it wouldn't happen in her Pern. Browns impressing females crosses the line, however. Although if a brown was going to impress a female, it would be a person like the character you've written; strong both mentally and physically, someone who knows what they want and isn't afraid to go after it. I usually don't like stories that impress bronze or browns to females, but I find myself making an exception here. If she had been a weakling, I would definitely give it two thumbs down, but since she's not, and I'm a sucker for nicely told impression scenes, which this has, I'd say this ranks in the upper tier of the Anne McCaffrey section. Not THE best, but far, far, far from the worst. Overall, an excellent effort. Thanks for sharing.
| Eruanna chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Hmm...odd odd odd...nice...