|Reviews for The path of the hunternin|
| Afi chapter 2 . 4/10
Ayyyyyy playa playa
| cody chapter 27 . 4/9
freaking loved it :)
| InflatedChimp chapter 27 . 3/2
Amazing story :D I've only read a couple of yours but so far this one is my favourite :)
In regards to your mini-rant Kishimoto has admitted that there are several plot holes in the timeline.
| InflatedChimp chapter 8 . 2/26
Though I am loving this story so far, I am disappointed with the fight between Jiraiya and the zombie duo. I suppose that the trapping of Hidan is a logically move though less exciting but I think that you've severely underplayed Kakuza's skill. He's the man who fought off the Shodaime and in canon it took multiple powerful opponents and cunning to finally defeat him,even after he was resurrected he was still a formidable foe taking weapons of the Sage and God Mode to defeat him.
I was really hoping for a big battle between to godly shinobi but you made it seem as if Kakuza was only at the level of someone like Kurenai or Anko, by no means weak but not amazingly strong either.
All that rant said and done this is a great story :D I just hate how almost universally Hidan and kakuza are passed off as weak. :p
| Bladesniper13 chapter 27 . 1/23
very good story enjoyed the read, well enjoy all your stories. One of the few authors who writes unusual pairings and does it very well. A solid conclusion, now if only more people wrote good hunter-nin stories lol
| Bomertank chapter 19 . 1/16
it's a good story and this is my 3rd time reading this. and I found some errors but very little I found one that is a mathematical error for your selection for your next one and it comes out to be 96% of votes and 269 voters. just saying, but I do like the story.
| aliks chapter 3 . 1/5
This is porno no fanfiction omg, bud I like it so much
| silverback95 chapter 27 . 1/7
Loved the story
| LiamMorg chapter 27 . 12/30/2013
While it wasn't an bad ending, I find it hard to believe any father would happily both miss his child's birth and the first 3 years of it's life, and then continue to pretend he is dead. I find it even harder to believe Hana would be OK with this, seeing as how she can never really be with Naruto in public. Regardless, it will suffice and it was a great story.
| LiamMorg chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
I feel like Hana and Naruto's relationship is a bit scarce in detail, which is a little disappointing. Oh well... that's my only real issue with the story, besides some grammar issues which I'm fine with.
| Adolf Oliver Nipple chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
Naruto would be 5'10 as the are 12 inches in 1 foot.
| Guest chapter 27 . 12/4/2013
Congratulações suas historias são maravilhosas. Amo ler cada uma delas, são emocionantes. Mas como favor pessoal eu gostaria de mais historia escrita por você com o romantismo de Naruto e Anko e Naruto e Kurenai. Porque o jeito que você escreve é impecável e os enredos são extraordinários, e fora que eu amo esses casais juntos. A historia Tired e Lone Wolf a forma que você juntou os casais foi impecável e maravilhoso de ler é imaginar. Mas uma vez Parabéns pelas suas historias...S2!S2!S2!S2!S2!.
| Kurama Thunderstorm chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
It's worthy to be a "Namikaze" descendant..
well in japanese "Nami" means "Wave", "Kaze" means "Wind".."Namikaze" means " the wave of wind"
| theronjohn325 chapter 27 . 11/4/2013
Yeah this was a really good one, the last few chapters were kind of tense. Good job.
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 27 . 10/23/2013
great story, really enjoyed it