Reviews for Internal Affairs
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
This story is hilarious and I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
Hahahaha OMG this is too funny! It was great! And OMG haha Hibari as a man-whore, and Mukuro as a mother and a sea lion, it was too much for me haha.
history chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
Great story! Poor Tsuna!
Ominous Rain chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
I wonder what happened for Tsuna to get such a large bill. Of course it's Hibari so not too hard to imagine but I find it funny Tsuna called him a man-whore! lol Your work has good humor!
CherryFlamingo chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Rofl I laughed o hard at this. This was way way inappropriate.
Another Anonymous Annoyance chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Had fun reading this!
Phireye chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Thank you. This is exactly what I needed after reading 'leave three words behind'. It was brilliant xD

And um...I didn't really get the footnote...abt coinciding with Bianchi's cycle. Do I want to know? XD

Great job anyway! Loved it :))
AekoAeviAthan chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Hibari you sly dog you!
sakimidare chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
D-dammit. I feel like quoting the whole thing, it was so amazing...but I'll save my breath. Just, just. This was amazingness to the point of infinity.
Soldier Perfection chapter 1 . 11/19/2011

"I haven't even-"


"It was just a thought,"


"If you change your mind-"


"Fine." Hibari acquiesced

you killed me with that :D
midnight.wolf62 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Haha, funny. Never thought Yamamoto would be interested in Hibari though. Then again, this is fanfiction...
Light and Darkness Are Brother chapter 1 . 8/30/2011

"That's gotta be in yen right?"


"Jesus fuck."


I also loved the entire 'I hate...' and tequila scene.

Comedy pro alert!
pink chayito chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
solo el tequila puede borrar "eso" de su mente...
Yui33Aki chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
That was awesome!

I love the part where you wrote about Mukuro being a mother:

"You were a MOTHER?"

I reread that a few times before i laughed so hard, i fell out of my chair.

Then i read what you typed next

"I was a mother a number of times." & "female more often than male" [60/40]

My kid sister now thinks i have lost it laughing for so long. [sweat drop]

Over all your story was a good read.

Hibari's sex drive and him whoring himself around. Then what you wrote at the end with Bianchi, i just could not stop laughing. ]

I love your story!
Peach Muffins chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
www! I love your writing. It is AMAZING.

There pretty much isn't much for me to say about what I don't like (which is good, but bad too?)

I'm confused who "the three" who exchanged glances are.

And ahahahahaha... it took a while for me to understand the last explanation thing (I died when I did). And the ending was amazing~~!
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