Reviews for A Love With No Limits: Edward & Bella
Safest time of the Day chapter 4 . 11/5/2008
I was thinking about a part of the story that you might concider. I was thinking that maybe Edward goes to the main land to hunt in the middle of the night and Bella wakes up. She then gets bord and turns on her Ipod and is singing and dancing when Edward gets home. He watches her. I think it would be funny and sensual at the same time then you can get to the smut after she gets all embarassed or she does a strip tease for him. What do you think? I mean I know that she hates to dance but everybody dances when they think nobody is looking, right?
Safest time of the Day chapter 5 . 11/5/2008
Are you sure this is your first fanfic? Just kidding I love this story. You did well on Edward's pov. You seem to be worried about the passion aspect of your story, but Im here to tell you it there. You really capture their love even when they are down right porno stars. You have a talent. Please keep it going till the end of the honeymoon. You've got my vote. Plus I love the way Edward thinks in your story, you should do some more from his pov.
smnthklly chapter 5 . 11/5/2008
That was... amazing. Again! I loved E POV you wrote it really well don't worry about that! Seriously I wish I was Bella in this story haha.

Kitchen & Pool are both hot but I vote Pool next!

that storm scene was just epic.. you're amazing at smut i tell you!
melmelia chapter 5 . 11/5/2008
OMFG! ive read all of this,, and i think u are incredible, brilliant, and omfg...

i think both the kitchen and the swimming pool scene will be just as mind blowing...x
Barbie2 chapter 5 . 11/5/2008
Loved it
MyriadProBold chapter 5 . 11/5/2008
That was great. I really enjoyed Edward's POV. I want him to keep to what he thought about in the 1, 2, and 3 at the end of the chapter. They could have a lot more fun if he wasn't so crazy with worry all the time.
VampireAngel94 chapter 5 . 11/5/2008
CUTEE! though Edward's P.O.V would have had more loathing in it, it was still Awsome! update ASAP!
breazoocullen chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
OMG... what an intensely erotic chapter! :) I loved Bella seducing Edward and then out in the storm...soaking wet... -fans self-

Absolutely loved it! You wrote Edward's POV brilliantly! And for the next one, I'd like to read a swimming pool scene! :)
LoveSaga1 chapter 3 . 11/4/2008
Great, really hot. I like it.
wishesonstars chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
so sexy! my vote is for a swimming pool scene. and dirty talking edward. ;)
danipony89 chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
WOw i really loved this chapter.. as the rest of them, please continue this story, it's amazing.. no kitchen scene, more of EPOV and more rough love.. if Bella has multiple orgasms, why dont you let Edward have them as well?
lakers0604 chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
amazing. pool scene ftw.
dragonprincess3 chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
kitchen scene!

you could try to get bella to eat something off of edward _ also i ve seen a few edward /bella stories that start with one or the other POV then switch to the others POV with the same scene! why dont you take a swing at that? your doin great! good luck with later chapters!
naiboa chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
Wow! Thank you for putting words and thoughts to what was missing in the honeymoon. I vote for a kitchen scene, with a very sexy/dirty Edward POV...Can we see Edward in charge now? This would be a nice twist! ;)
melmelia chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
OMFG! this was ur FIRST [?] fanfic? u had me totaly captured! lol my dirty dirty mind, but omfg...
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