Reviews for Deep Beyond the Swirling Waters
ShadowsAngel1 chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
cool very good
kisshufan4ever chapter 2 . 11/12/2010
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Robynx Naida chapter 2 . 6/25/2010
this is totally cool you need to contine i cant wait to see what happens next!

;p
x.New Account.x chapter 2 . 5/11/2010
Nicee write more plz
Rackler chapter 2 . 2/22/2010
I love it so far. Please update soon.
MewRebecky chapter 2 . 12/19/2008
heheheh I have an idea - you don't have to use it or anything.

Ichigo could be set up to marry Masaya or Ryou or someone XD

I am so evil

Hahaha Mint is Ichigo's slave and best friend XD

Bec xx
MewRebecky chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Why did he check if his clothes were still on? LMAO!{He felt his clothes; they were still on}

I just have to say this... {“And have I commented on just how beautiful and alluring your lovely honey-coloured eyes are?”} Is this how aliens speak or something? because he's 15.. so she would be around that age... she scares me... *hides*

It's all good though :)

Heh heh I imagined Mint as a girl with long sky blue hair before it said Aizawa Mint because I must be so tired.

I am guessing now that they don't know each other? Or maybe they do... I am writing this as I read..

I am wanting a bubble! :D

Bec xx

P.S. This is the last story I'm reading tonight... I will continue tomorrow... so tired... you probly can't understand my rambling... oh well :D
Violist chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
Great story! I cannot wait to see the rest! I love your plot! I really enjoyed this.
Safaia Bara chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
Holy cow! That was fantastic- very intriguing...although a bit confusing. Please do explain more soon...

One tiny thing. "Highness" is used when you address a prince or princess. When addressing the king or queen, you say "Majesty". Just a little note.

Great job! Luv ya!

*SB*
Suuz112 chapter 2 . 10/19/2008
Oh! I love this story! O

Why do you have all the nice stories? (

It's not FAIR XD No, just kidding!

I love it, so PLEASE continue ASAP! D

Sushi! :3
Tazzybizzy chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
KOOL! I LOVE IT! and can't wait for next chapter!
XxxDeathStarxxX chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Cute. Very imaginative.I can not even guess what is about to happen! I have lost my touch! . Of course Kish is going to fall in love with the princess. King and queen... hm... ah, Lettuce and Ryou? Then again I could NEVER see Lettuce as her mother... Zakuro? That's not much better either, is it?

Oh, and just as a note you use the word 'teen' too much. try 'boy' or 'male' some. 'green haired teen' gets annoying. Use variety!

Hope to read from you soon!

-XDeathStarx
XxLettieXPaixX chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
What does AU mean?

Great first chapter :)
Safaia Bara chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Whoa! I already love this story to pieces!Mermaids are my favorite fairy tale (I am sometimes obsessed with Disney's The Little Mermaid- Hey, it came out the year I was born...) Getting back on topic...

This was a fantastic first chapter- nice and long and detailed. Great work!

Good luck with the next chapter!

*SB*