Reviews for An Undesired Desire
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
It's 'Since when did you start caring about anyone but yourself, let alone me,'.
There. I've corrected one of your infinite grammatical mistakes which you are so prone to making.
RandomnessRules chapter 9 . 8/12/2009
why is malfoy calling snape by his last name? if they are friends wouldn'd he call him severus
Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I like it!

So I go to read the secuel now ñ.ñ

Kisses from Argentina!
lunabyrd666 chapter 9 . 1/4/2009
Not bad, the whole thing, it was pretty funny but hard to read because the dialog wasn't tagged very well. It was a good story though.

~Robyn
lunabyrd666 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Wow, not bad. I tend to stay away from Harry Potter fics because they normally follow the same pattern. However, this one seems good so far.

Can't wait to read the rest.

~Robyn