|Reviews for Family Legacy|
| Un83ata813 chapter 1 . 4/22/2017
What the hell, man?
| Stringfellow chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
| dbfox007 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Spooky would be the word I would describe. Good story though.
| Dsman chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
so much for happy endings
| RedBlueGreen chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Brilliant, a. Creepy as all hell. It's a great depiction of a punishment that goes on down the generations. I couldn't say Tara got more than she deserved.
Loved the sting at the end.
| The Halfa Wannabe chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Fucking A. Awesomeness, you got a real future if you decide to start writing horror.
So glad I saw that crossover tie in with this, to the favorites!
| aedan cameron chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
| Mr. Wizard chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Absolutely fantastic. Great tale of implacable vengeance, complete with a funny/chilling ending.
| Muzzlehatch chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Reminds me of the terrifying secret of Glamis Castle in Scotland, where the eldest child of the family is told the secret upon reaching adulthood.
| soulman3 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
That was some Kim and Tara.
| That Swedish Guy chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Happened on this story because it was refered on by . I already thanked him for brining this (and the original) to my attention. So now it is time for me to thank you for writing this, and the ending in Resolved.
| Zaratan chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Okay, that was positively riveting and scary at the same time. Beyond intense really. you really took Cap's story and made it your own with this.
| LTAOZFAN chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Very interesting spin-off from CaptainKodak1's stories. But I wonder if the Kim-thing in the cistern will be satisfied when Tara finally dies? Or has Tara set a curse on her family "unto the last generation" as the saying goes?
The little kid in a "Kim Possible" Halloween costume at the door for Tara to meet was a superb touch! But it would have been even spookier if the sight of the kid in that outfit had made Tara's heart stop.
Cue the theme music: "Funeral March for a Marionette."
"Them's my views, amen, so be it."
"Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson
| screaming phoenix chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Chilling daccu65 very chilling, and right in spirit with the holiday.
| Soth11 chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Awesome story man! The plot was positively riveting. Grammer and spelling were good as well. Tara as a real villian was a very nice touch. The ending was a good surprise also with the trick or treater.
Question though? Did the little girl put Tara in her grave from the fright? Just curious.
Again though Great Story.