Reviews for The Mask, The Witch and The Moonlight
Belle345 chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Why doesn't this have more reviews? This was very good, great job.
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I didn't think a Malfoy had to impress anybody, but he does seem to have impressed Narcissa quite a bit!
TranceGemini613 chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Very good (m hot!) overall. Some places you might want to think about your word choice; ie, "the windows hung on the wall"-windows are usually flush with the wall, firm, attached. Hanging isn't quite right. There are a couple of other spots but I'm too tired to go into detail. Maybe later on. Otherwise good job! :)
silverlasso chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Fucking hot. Beyond fucking hot. Great job.
David Fishwick chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Interesting idea and I liked their playful conversations. Thanks for writing.