Reviews for The Unexpected Feeling
Emmy1512 chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Excellent! :) A few spelling mistakes, but everyone has them. Overall it's well written and well edited.

My favourite line...s were:

We are all dying slowly, but with House I die so fast I can see how the world moves. Sunsets move like symphonic dances, lips tangle and untangle until they form words together in some language that was never supposed to be spoken.

Until the dead reform into the living, and pain turns to pleasure.

It described almost exactly how I saw Cameron's love for House.

It's been so long since I've read/reviewed a Hameron story that I almost passed this one up. Glad I didn't! :)

Good job!

Emmy xx
SarahD chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Really, really amazing imagery! It was a pleasure reading this!
PaintRedRoses chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
I completely enjoyed every second of this one-shot. It ended perfectly, it started perfectly, and everything in between was flawless. You captured the essence of both characters in just a few short words- which is exceptionally difficult to do (I know I have trouble doing it as well). I hope to see more from you!

-Jen
BetweenTwoWorlds chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Hey, great fic! You did a really good job with it!
lucindadixon chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
I loved these lines:

"Pavlovian, he makes a cruel response and I reach out for love."

and

"For that’s what House always was, he was the pain."
SexyScottishDoc chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
::gasps:: wow...just...so descriptively beautiful I have no words to describe it. this is definitely the best fic (one-shot or multi-chapter) that I have read in a long time. I was left breathless by this, awesome job!
catgrl chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
That was interesting...
sapere aude chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
nice fic
sinisterkid92 chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
Wow, this was amazing!