Reviews for Young and Alone
Guest chapter 6 . 8/8
All at once Edward realizes who this Alexander is and so He take Aro hand and show Aro what happen he nods and he leaves and goes and find Alexander and tells U killed A Human woman with A Child and now U Will die because what U Done. Charlie shows up at the Cullen's when he find out where Bella and tells them he come to get is Precious Bella but they R Not decived they told him that they w what he had done to Bella and He threathing to take Bella anyway than Edward tells him of all the things he has done Bella and Charlie gets this Scared look on his face and starts begging and crying them not to tell what he's done that they can have Bella . She is so scared she hides behind Edward and Charlie notice it he looks at her and said Hi kid come here and give U Daddy Hug she start shaking the Cullen's tell him to leave and never show his face around there again. So they raise Bella and Edward get togather and get married. and so on . I'm not a writer.
Destineyofme chapter 6 . 12/13/2014
Please continue to write on this story it is really interesting
Ariali chapter 4 . 6/23/2011
Ok, this is kind of confusing. So Bella is like 5 or 6, has been abused for the last year by her own father, hasn't eaten for several days, has a broken rib, wakes up in a strange house after being abducted by someone she just tried to steal from, and is now told that her kidnapper is a vampire like the thing that killed her mom. Why is she not freaking out?
Fee-Sha16 chapter 6 . 2/13/2011
great story!)
Smiley-Zombie-Studio chapter 6 . 1/2/2011
I think that Alexander should have bine part of the gaurdbut betrayed the volutire (damn i suck at spelling) and also i think jane should become smitten too because that'd be hiloruoes to read.
Yin7 chapter 6 . 10/26/2010
good story are going to finish

any time soon
mckeown chapter 6 . 6/19/2010
are you going to finish this?
Sleeping-Not-So-Beauty chapter 6 . 5/13/2010
omg! this is really good so far and i can't wait to see what happens!

i hope you update soon x
high-off-skittles-XP chapter 6 . 4/2/2010
This is a really good story! You should have the other cullens come home soon and meet bella! I love your Aro he is way better as a happy go lucky kinda guy. He could be like Bellas great uncle! lol. I can't wait for more.

l8r g8r

chris62287 chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
love it! update soon please!
lin stiernet chapter 6 . 1/7/2010
type more and fast


gm chapter 6 . 12/2/2009
u r an amazing writer

ur stories are very original update soon!
SnarryShipper101 chapter 6 . 11/7/2009
Hurry up and update! This is taking so long! This story is so good and I love it so you have to update!
BookLover97 chapter 6 . 10/6/2009
loved it!
Khemikle Disaster chapter 6 . 10/4/2009
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