Reviews for What's Wrong With You?
Liv it up 124 chapter 12 . 6/11/2012
I absolutely loved this story! It perfectly captured the essence of the show and both Dani and Charlie :) Well done!
LonelyDreamer45 chapter 12 . 9/9/2009
great ending...
maipigen chapter 12 . 5/12/2009
This was so sweet. Thansk for giving them a lovable ending!

Happy future writing

ditte mai

jo chapter 12 . 4/9/2009
i cant remember if i ever commented but hey, whats another one. this story was so cute! i absolutely loved it! great work! ;D Peace!
Leafy08 chapter 12 . 1/28/2009
I've been readint his since you started... well almost.

And I've loved every bit of it. It's a really interesting idea and also very well written. Reese and Crews are both very in character. Great work!

I'm sad to see it finished!
star jelly chapter 12 . 1/27/2009
I loved this story!

I seriously hope that you write more life fanfiction because they are so good!

This was an amazing story, just so you know!
citosol chapter 12 . 1/27/2009
ah...thanks. -_-

I think that's impossible for Charlie and Dani having a thing like the one you described, but I LOVED EVERY SINGLE WORD OF IT!

I loved their kiss, and I loved the ending, with Charlie keeping on repeating her sentences!

Hehe...I'm so happy we forced you to write down eleven chapters of this story!

I hope you'll write other 'life' stories, and I hope we'll keep in touch!

thanks for now and bye!

star jelly chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
That was an amazing chapter!

The ending was so emotional! I thought that I was going to cry!

I hope you write more, you are a great writer!
shippergrl25 chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
AWESOME OPOSSUM! loved it! poor reese! why can't charlie see it!
citosol chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
Reading this I was *aw* and then *nonononoNONONONO!* and then *aw* again.

Just tell me this is not the end.

No this isn't the end.

It couldn't/shoudn't be the end.

It mustn't be the end!

(okay, with those sentences I revised all the modals verbs...)

Don't worry for the delay, real life is cruel and it never stops running...

This is not the it?

*paces up and down the room muttering modals verbs"
I Keep Goldfish In My Bra chapter 10 . 1/7/2009
Yum. I'm sorry it's not more ddescriptive, but that is honestly what I'm thinking:D

Yumm, storyness
citosol chapter 10 . 1/5/2009
*_* oh girl, you did it again!

and now I'm here wondering what they're going to do in his mansion...

because, as you said, Tideese is good, but CREESE IS BETTER!

I want to give you only one little suggestion: be more descriptive, let us imagine the scene as you're seeing it, let us see through your eyes, and you'll have a VERY HAPPY readers!

Anyways, I just can't wait to read more!

:) "see" you!

(and thanks again for your work!)
star jelly chapter 10 . 1/5/2009
I loved that chapter!

I can't wait to read more!

I liked the end, sigh, if only if only!
star jelly chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
I thought that was great! I really liked how in the end she was so mad at herself for acting like him. I was really funny!
citosol chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
I don't think you made a crappy piece, I easily see that actually happen between them indeed!

Him putting his hand on hers trying to help her and then both of them being awkward about it and Dani realizing how much Charlie is "inside" her...

it could totally happen!

I'm so happy you updated!


Merry X'Mas!

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