|Reviews for Through the Wind and Rain|
| ChouzuTao chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I really like dialogue pieces like this. I've read more plays then books... :P There's a great flow here, and I can tell you do go with the flow. There was no need to interject as the characters just spoke themselves.
| ChouzuTao chapter 3 . 2/17/2009
- Nice subtle work, a quiet moment between the two, is perfect. There's really a sweet feeling of familiarity, which many fics of this nature lack. I like how they're not jumping all lovey dovey... Its a realistic love and respect. Yosh!
| ChouzuTao chapter 4 . 2/17/2009
- There is a portion of this where I had a disconnect: I think you should describe him being there, because the mystery of why she is mad will still be there, but without it, I didn't even understand what was going on. You described a tired day, an empty street, and suddenly she's upset. It jerked me out of the story. Cause I was like... "wah?"
| ChouzuTao chapter 5 . 2/17/2009
- You definitely got better as you went along
- This one is even better than the Star Gazer. Sakura comes into this scenario very clearly needing something, it was so nice how the scene unravelled with Naruto giving her just that
- Naruto starts off the scene trying to figure out how to convey his feelings to her, over-thinking it, and its just the simplicity of actually just saying it that actually reaches her. Great piece.
| ChouzuTao chapter 6 . 2/17/2009
You numb us with these moments of tension, then an eye of the hurricane to reflect and then melt us with the moments of just how much they understand one another. These moments must come from some personal experience, its hard to imagine such honest moments like these coming from someone who's never experienced a such a knowing relationship. Great job.
| NarutoRocks21113043 chapter 6 . 1/29/2009
These storys are all great, can't wait for your next!
| uzukun7 chapter 6 . 1/29/2009
that was a great drabble. i could totally picture naruto reacting that way to someone celebrating his birthday. of course he wouldnt see it as a celebration of him and his achievements, but rather a reminder of the tragedy that occured all of those years ago. in either case, i hope you update soon. laterz
| Noir Rose chapter 6 . 1/29/2009
| SilentAdaon chapter 6 . 1/29/2009
“Sakura-chan! Get in here! This cake it great! Its turning my mouth orange!”
LOL. Best line from this chapter. LOL. Sakura-chan can make Naruto's tongue really really orange. _
| akira-chan1 chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Beautifully written, such vivid images that you've painted with words. I'm deeply interested in the way you use the sences and how you twist the unexpected. I hope you will continue writting fanfics for a long time.
BTW I cried too when zutara sank...BUT IT HAS A SUBMARINE! :D expect the unexpected, unless if expected XD Also, have you heard of the fanmade series their making? They are creating a whole new sereis of avatar, but with Zutara as an ending. It's rather interesting. It's a big project and though I can't participate ('Cause I don't own a sanner -cries-) I think you could help. As I said before, you have a beautiful way of writing and I think they may still a few openings for the plot. Heres the link to the person in charge
And heres the link to my account
Don't worry, it's a safe account
| uzukun7 chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
so what was he trying to write to her before he gave up on it? was there some sort of special occassion or was he just trying to be romantic and tell her that he loves her through a well-worded letter? regardless, he should have realised that he always performs his best by just puffing out his chest looking right at her and just expell all of the emotions that he has in his heart towards her. its funny how she seemed to figure that out before he did. and conversely, i liked the way naruto was able to give sakura advice on how to deal with her flaws since he would know more about her flaws than anyone else. in either case, that was a very nice drabble, you definitely have a certain touch for these things. i hope you update soon. laterz
| megasean3000 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Very well done :D NaruSaku rules :D
| Believeit6 chapter 4 . 10/29/2008
This was good, with Sakura's narraration and your word choice. I did, however, encounter a sentence that didn't make much sense. I will place it in this review.
...but that doesn’t me you stop talking to them."
| uzukun7 chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
that was a very good observation into naruto and sakuras life. its true, sakura is a tough girl, but the only problem is that the guy that shes got herself tangled up with is a man who is just as defiant, strong-headed, and blunt as she is. and not only that but he loves her with everything hes got, whether that be good or bad. so if theyre in a fight, hell still be there at the end of the day because he loves her and wont run away. in either case you did a very good job with this topis and i hope your next installment comes out soon. laterz
| Starrytownblues chapter 3 . 10/28/2008
Its so beautiful! And stunning. It makes me fluffy. Hehehe. Make moore!