Reviews for Unintended
DeepInTheShadows12345 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
omg i loved this. it was realistic, and i loved the way it was in Axel's point of view and eevrything. im not very good at explaining how much i like stuff, but just know that i loved this :3
Minatu-Corneille chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
This reminded me of how Boy meets Boy was written! I really enjoyed that book, and this was quite cute! I liked it! xD
Dreamy Duskywing chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
awhh, this is so sweet. Go Demyx for being brave! You have an amazing talent to write these song fics, even though I don't akways know the songsm you do manage to mesh the song with the story so wonderfully! I'm glad Axel chose Demyx, I never did like Larxene! lol.
Kherin chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Aww...My throat actually tightened up, this is so cute!

I love fluffy stuff, this was so sweet 3
Sonreya chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
OMG! that was so adorable. i loved it. and akudemy is way better than akulark . i liked when they surprised eachother. and i agree with axel... demy could have told him sooner...but then again i understand why demy didnt it was very well done, as always. and i hope you write more songfics. they turn out really well just like ur normal stories.

-love ya-

Sonreya
XbuttonsX chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
I love it, as always! Didn't change at all from msn did it? XD But I loved it then so I love it this time! XD And you're right, you say them both a lot! XDD! love you anyways, An-chan!
AkuDemyfan chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
That was so cute! Awesome work with it! Gonna fave this! ;)
dumbiee chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
OMFG.

Seriously. Just ... omg.

So, when I logged in today, I was like, "Hmm ... I think I want to write a song fic." And since you were using so many of Muse's songs, I listened to a couple of them and found that Unintended was one of my favorites and told myself I'd write one to that. Before writing, though, I must check my email! So I did, and what did I find? An aboslutely BEAUTIFUL song fic to Unintened. Really, you just made my day awesome. You really, really did. -hug- 8D

Ahem, anyway ...

First, thank you very much for your dedication. :D I appreciate it a lot, and I'm glad you're continuing your song-fic stories; they really are great!

Second, I've never really heard of Axel x Demyx before, so I wasn't too sure about the couple. Your writing, however, made me smile and grin every time they kissed or talked with each other. Axel can make a good couple with anyone. He's THAT amazing. XD

THIRD ... I love it. n_n Obviously I love it, I love everything you write. You should make some more Death Note stories, the one about B and L was really cute. 8D ... Except, you know, for the rape and cutting-of-the-self. -DIES- BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN. It added drama to the story; good drama, not bad. xD I love that feeling you get when you read about something awful, like rape for example, and then you just smile when the character recovers from it with the love of their life. (x

So ... yesh. :BB

You keep writing, missy. 8D