|Reviews for Noticing|
| smartin555 chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
| xxcharlie chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
i love this! i have always wanted chuck and lilly to have this relationship!
| Lennie1984 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I liked it
I liked C/L
| Korella May chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
As soon as I finished watching 2x16 "You've Got Yale" I just had to re-read your story because you are one of the few who got the Lily/Chuck dynamic just right!
| chozinha chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
So sweet :
I love when Lily actually plays the mother characther.
You should write another one of this!
| Princess Persephone chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
This was unbelievably amazing. It was brilliant to look at Chuck through Lily's eyes-and very effective. I love how Chuck was so taken aback by her concern...he's never dealt with that before. This was wonderful! Great job!
| lucasta chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
What a good little story. I can see Lily being concerned over Chuck, with Chuck being surprised at her concern.
| songofthec chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
WOW. This was amazing. You captured both characters perfectly, it's like this is part of the show. I'm glad to see a fic like this.
| Phoenix.G.Fawkes chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I've wanted to read something like this for quite some time, because I found rather interesting the little interaction between Lily and Chuck that we got to see in the show. We've seen how Lily has become a more responsible parent throghout the first season and she genuinely seems to like Chuck, so it wouldn't surprise me if she were the first to notice when he behaved in a different manner. And it was so touching Chuck's surprise at anyone noticing his absence. It's heartbreaking but you managed to write in a way that wasn't overly angst-y, and the dialogue between them felt very in character for both of them. All in all, an excellent fic.
| Blood Red Kiss of Death chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Seriously, THANK YOU, for this piece.
With what we've learned about Chuck, this was definitely needed.
I'm writing a LC fic, too, and I've got Serena totally rolling her eyes over Lily's worry, and I love that you've done it, too. Because I think to her and everyone else, this worry is totally unnecessary for CHUCK BASS.
I love that Lily has Serena LOOKING for Chuck. *giggles*
NATE! OH NO! *cries* NO! CN is over! Nate's moved on. NO! Love that Serena said Nate should have told him. LOL. Love that scene.
And then the LC scene in the end. She's noticing! And she can tell the different emotions. I love it. I love that she's trying. I need this on the show so bad. Enough LR scenes. If you can't get us vdB, then give us LC. Because if you're going to have THIS backstory with Chuck's mom, then we REALLY, REALLY, REALLY need another LC scene. V/V had an amazing scene, and the little that we get at breakfasts always make me smile, but we need a real convo. Showing that she cares. That someone cares.
And I love that she totally loves his charm. *giggles*
I love you for this. Thank you!
| CamiJo chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
This is exactly the kind of scene I would want to see on the show. I adore the Lily/Chuck dynamic and your fic was awesomely written!
It's so sweet how shocked he gets when he realises that Lily actually worries about him.
Poor guy isn't exactly used to the concerned parents thing.
Well done! x
| krola chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I liked it because, well, Chuck needs a mom!
| Alien Altered chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
So so sweet. And very well written. I loved it! Great work!
| Just-Plain-Roo chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Aww! This was so cute, I love Lily's character!
| SilkenBone922 chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
VERY Important fic...Good Girl!