Reviews for The Last Place You Look
lorrainasolis chapter 80 . 9/26/2011
this was the best story ive ever read. it got me into Death cab for Cutie and the Get Up Kids :) it made me want to cry also haha i really want this story prinrted or something so i can read it wherever i go.. there needs to be a sequel or something. what im trying to say is I. LOVE. THIS. STORY.
lorrainasolis chapter 29 . 7/27/2011
haha im listenin 2 the bands and all the songs u put on here and i like most of them so far... keep updating :)
serene remedy chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I just wanted to tell you I really enjoy all your stories. Your a great writer, and I hope you keep it up.

I like all your characters, and how you write them! Jonah is my favorite, though. Haha. I'd loved to read about him. I think everyone needs a Jonah in their lives somewhere. Oh, and you've got some amazing music taste. Thank you for introducing me to The Get Up Kids. Already in love with them. If you write anymore stories, just know I'll be reading them!
Void-NonExistent chapter 80 . 8/3/2010
This story was AMAZING! When they broke up I almost cried, but there back together now. I've also read some of your other stories and let me just say: YOU'VE GOT TALENT!
christasaur chapter 81 . 1/10/2010
BAH. First, do not sign off FF for good everevervever because I will insanely miss you and I will also nevernevernever sign on back here. Because you're like the only thing on here that makes me want to come back here.

Okay so to answer your question, I'd like you to find Last Place/Perfect Kisses but I think the putting two in one story thing seems cool. I wanna see how that works out. So I'm going for that option.

I am, too, deeply attached to your stories. I will be extremely upset if it goes *poof*! So ahem, do not *poof* it. :)
heyfriday chapter 81 . 6/27/2009
H0lLiieIzZaBeAstii3 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Nice I love your style of writing by the way - simple yet complicated .. Yes, I'm aware that I make no sense :D
christasaur chapter 80 . 4/11/2009

i didn't review this chapter?

le gasp!

haha. yeah...

anyways, i love the epilgfdgsgkd. whatever its called. i can't spell. E-P-I-L-O-GUE. yeah.

anyways. the i love yous. and the kiss.

and the, "i fell in love with you under a streetlight"

beautiful. [':


oopsies. said that twice already. teehee.


i love bennett&elisa.
JessNOVICE chapter 80 . 3/23/2009
too lazy to login in aha.

I loved this story, I really did.

I honestly didn't like it when they broke up, but I like where it went from there.

this is an amazing story, and I got butterflys in my stomach when reading.

I think your amazingly talented.

Jess Willcocks.
lxl icefly lxl chapter 80 . 3/12/2009
I absolutley love your story. It is so amazing that I could promise I was reading a published novel it was that good. Thank you so much for sharing this story it is now my favorite I have read.
teamEdwardx17x chapter 80 . 2/1/2009
YES. omg, see, i realized after i had reviewed that you never told us what was in the note but then i forgot to message you about it.

im so glad you remembered and told us. thats so perfect. :) :) :)

ObviouslyObsessed chapter 79 . 1/26/2009
Wow, that was really good. I especially loved the scene where she got back with Bennett. And I liked how you included the title in the last sentence. :D You did a good job on this story. Keep it up!
Fairytalegrl chapter 79 . 1/24/2009
Amazing. I loved all your characters and everything about this story. I'll make sure to read your other stories.
christasaur chapter 79 . 1/24/2009
Erin, you are the most amazing writing that I have ever met. Seriously.

You make me feel like I'm actually an invisible character in here.

I was so surprised that this was the end!

I told my friend Bridget that I was going to miss Bennett and Elisa.

She knows the story about them since I started talking and rambling about them.

Last Place is probably one of the best Fanfictions that I have ever read. Or one of the best story I ever read! I never cried, laughed, smiled, grew mad over a book before! I swear, its like you're controlling my emotions! Haha

I really will miss them, I'll read Last Place over and over again.

I hope Bennett and Elisa will get married, start a family, and be together forever. (:

I'll daydream.


Aka. One of your many biggest fans.
teamEdwardx17x chapter 79 . 1/24/2009
I'm bursting with happiness. I'm honestly about to cry right now. Like my eyes burn and my nose hurts like they always do when I'm going to cry. You are truly amazing, you really are, and I can see how much you've grown since you started Perfect Kisses. One day, you will get these published, you here me? And remember, I get the first legit copy of each. Remember that, alright? Not your mom or your grandma or your best friend or your own Bennett Williams. But Me. :)

And I mean this in a completely noncreepy way, but I LOVE YOU.


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