Reviews for Shampoo
meadow11 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
loved it!
BynsThree chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
I adore first time stories, this was a great one, because nothing ever goes as smoothly as one thinks it will.

I enjoy reading all of your stories

Keep writing you rock
mschris44 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
WOW! I almost came, without even being touched.
jdl45703 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
WOW! thats all i can say. great job!
xkryptonic.kattx chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
wow. LOVE IT!

lol. Dirty Talking Edward is so hot!

Fliberty chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This is a careful blend of sweet and hot - nice to see Bella taking charge!
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 3/13/2010


Nothing else to say :)

Keep writing.
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
There is no Edward hotter than Dirty Talking Edward. Hot damn!

Great job on your first fic! I'm the same way when I get a review. I remember the first time someone favorited my first fic, I almost pissed myself! LOL!

The sexin was hawt and take-charge, filthy mouth Edward literally made me drool. M... *daydreaming about DirtyMouthWard*
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I do love me some DTE...'specially if he's wet. M...
blb1000 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Such and innocent story leading to a lemony ending. Thank you!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I want strawberry shampoo! i loved this!
MercuryComet63 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Wow. Thats one damn good lemon... ]
mellicious secret chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
This is one of my absolute favourite one-shots! It's a perfect mixture of hotness and sweetnuss! Well done!
rosalindleconte chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
This is a great story, good set up, drama, and nice result. You should consider working this further...

what happens' when Charlie gets home?

Does she make a second go at the feel-a-see-o?

Where were ALice and Jasper during this whole deal? What "went down" with them all last night?

Endless possibilities~looking forward to seeing them played out!

Rosalind Leconte
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
great, hot lemon...:)
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