Reviews for The Observer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope that you continuing with this story! It's very good so far. |
![]() ![]() Please continue this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() kml kml kml! update continue and whats the pairings! please put more comedy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey man, why havnt you updated in like a year. anyway, this has the making of a good story. anyway, please consider updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, I should have guessed Hinata would react like that. This is an interesting story-line, this is the first time I have seen it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) great story...when we will get a chapter 3? PS: 'ANBU’s departure also snapped Iruka from his terror induced paralysis and prompted him to do what all men did since the beginning of time when faced by an opponent they just couldn’t hope to defeat, be it an erupting volcano, raging forest fire, or his pregnant wife’s violent mood swings. He dove for cover.' this was funny as Hell |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading the story's beginning chapter and would like more of the it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey you alerted my story so i came to check ya out its really good Lol *KAWAII* *Hinata glomps naruto. The Anko Glomps naruto with her chest* funny i like this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey booze hound u going update this its good stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like funny and and as a good start. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked reading the chapters and want more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! Chapter two! And it's everything I thought it would be. Wondful. I laughed a lot. Keep it up! Love the Hinata reaction too. |
![]() ![]() is your mansion next to the pit of lime? or pit of sulfur? i heard there WAS a pit of vodka but god moved it to heven. ...how did you make shino faint? the world would sooner collapse into itself than for shino to publicly loose conciess for any length of time... i also like that withen 80 paragraphs of your chapter you have naruto being boobed to death. always a good sine! also make sure you don't lock yourself in your own wine celler. you well drink all yer drink and ya won't haf e drink wen ya wake ups. den wAle you do? the Oddity |
![]() ![]() Love your story. I just wondering if there really is some kind of connection between the 4th and naruto in you story. I also wonder if kyubi will ever come to the village. Oh and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, this story shows some good promise, hope to see another chapter soon |