Reviews for The Reality of Dreams
Icipher chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
This had me really confused in the beginning because I thought it was Ivy in the beginning. I hate to break it to you, but this is more Nick/Rachel than Ivy/Rachel, IMHO. :P

I have to read it again to appreciate it as a story. As I do I can appreciate it a lot more because I'm not so confused all the time. Very well written.

It definitely was interesting, and what repeating dreams the characters have is an interesting topic that could be further explored.

I also noticed that Rachel was sleeping in Ivy's bed. :)
siDEADde chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Masterful...absolutely.

I thought it was Ivy...then Marshall...it took me until the scar to think it was Nick.

This is excellent, absolutely on par with your other story. Emotionally layered, story within a story...wonderful.

I would love to see it continued and, personally, I would love to see it in first person. I love seeing a character's thoughts.

Thank you so much!
Jaina Solo2 chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
*raises hand* I did!

You know my favorite scene in the books? It's in FOC when Rachel is (I think) listening to Kisten and Ivy talk about the future of a blood relationship between Ivy and Rachel and something he says makes Rachel think of what being in a relationship with Ivy would be like. It was just beautiful and sweet and sexy as hell. This kind of reminded me of that. Or at least I was hoping that's where it was going. :p

But I really loved Ivy here. She was scary as hell, but also kind of awesome. Nick's dream doesn't have to go far for reality. Ivy really is just that possessive!

Anyway, loved the story, and I'd love to see you continue it too. :D
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