Reviews for Forgiven
BellaJ'89 chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Please Please update - this is fantastic!
icrodriguez chapter 3 . 1/12/2009
Seriously addicted. More please!
Khlarka2 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
great chapter i loved it! update asap soon plzz!
BellaJ'89 chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
PS please update soon!
ridiculous-83 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
this is different.. i'm hooked..

please continue
BellaJ'89 chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
I have one thing to say - wow.
IheartEdward chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
This is so unbelievably good. I'm serious you have a real gift, you have Edwards POV down pat. And oh my...all those sweet romantic moments just made me smile so much! Have fun on your trip, I can't wait to see what happens next! D
Lazybelle chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
Really like the style, especially since it's all from Edward's point of view! Please continue!I really like where the stroy is headed!Lazybelle
jadeEyre chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
Wow! that is absolutely beautiful! !i was on the edge of my desk chair reading both chapters! You are an amazing writer - i hope you will continue this story -

simply breathtaking.
reeb.myoo chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
UPDATEE!

iloveitt!
reeb.myoo chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
woah. i think - i THINK that i possibly prefer this to the ACTUAL one ... okay, i don't PREFER it, but it's VERY CLOSE! incredible. LOVEITT!
IheartEdward chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
That was incredible! Please keep it up! Oh and that poem was simply beatiful, do you think you might continue this? It would be really exciting and fun to see how things unfold according to this 'version' of events. Please consider it! lol, anyway great job!
rotem chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
hey kendra love the story
lithium17 chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
i lurrvved this story!
MTVicesk8r chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
this was so so so beautifully written! nice job!