|Reviews for Feast of the Samhain|
| Endgame65 chapter 16 . 11/17/2009
Awesome, I wasn't expecting an update on this one for a while. There were a few grammatical errors, but I forgive you for the relatively quick update. Sheppard really won't last much longer if he isn't at least half-Garou. I'm beginning to see why Birkita let Ronon live once she got back to Atlantis, however that happened.
I guess my question now is did Nodonn do what Birkita had asked about bringing all the pack leaders and their Teeth. While I doubt the SGC will want to cooperate, especially with Sheppard, these next few chapters should be interesting.
| Endgame65 chapter 15 . 10/23/2009
At last an update. Great work. I was worried you were going to let this lie for another two months or something. All the Garou know about Birkita now huh? Well, that's not going to go well. It's also nice to see Sheppard and Birkita working together in the pits, but I imagine things are going to start going badly very soon.
| Endgame65 chapter 14 . 10/13/2009
You're going to update this soon won't you? The anticipation of the next chapter in both this story and Caliber is killing me.
| Stealth Dragon chapter 14 . 8/11/2009
Oh, man, please tell me this is the start of Sheppard coming to realize that he's safe and among friends. I so adored Ronon holding Sheppard, comforting him while he was sick, then continue to hold and assure him afterwards. I've been wanting someone to hug and hold the poor boy forever, and my happiness was mighty that it finally happened :D
| Endgame65 chapter 14 . 8/11/2009
You rock, great update. Nodonn's a werewolf huh, I actually hadn't seen it coming. Things should be interesting as Sheppard gets better. Keep up the great work and update again soon.
| Sterenyk Strey chapter 14 . 8/11/2009
Oh, thank the stars that you are back up and running. You won't leave our boy in this mess, surely! I've been fretting somewhat over Dog these last few, what - months? Eek! Yes, months! How did he get like this? Agh! I. Must. Know... Then, fix him! Make him all purty again! And let him know he's luffed. Aw. Anyway, fantastic job, and thank you for sharing. Hope the chapters come thick and fast now... *crosses everything crossable/knocks on wood, plastic, metal, rock and other hardish stuff*
*changes mind and knocks on jello. Less ouchy*
| Elanthra chapter 5 . 7/31/2009
You modestly say that this chapter isn't very good... why?
Poor Sheppard as Dog still not comprehending that he's somewhere safe and being helped... actually seeing their care in terms of potential for torture... feeling so helpless to fight it... doesn't feel not very good to me!
And the voices of the team in the cell at the end so spot on... I'd say well done, myself...
| Elanthra chapter 3 . 7/31/2009
I'm liking this story a lot...
I thought that I wouldn't like it... I don't like werewolves usually... but it came recommended so I thought I'd give it a try...
I thought that I wouldn't like it... but it's dark and I like that...
I thought that I wouldn't like it... so far, it's heavy on narrative and short on dialogue, and I don't usually like that... but though the dialogue is scant, it really is THEM and every word of it counts... it's as if it gets intensified somehow...
I thought that I wouldn't like it... but I loved that beginning, where Sheppard calls himself Dog... so imaginatively written... and now I'm saying 'love' and not 'like'...
I thought that I wouldn't like it... sometimes there are typo errors that shouldn't be there in such an otherwise perfect story... but I'm willing to forgive because I like this so much... When Keller asks: 'My God, Sheppard, what happened to you?'... you can't help yourself... you just have to keep reading to find out what DID happen... it's called spellbinding... and I like that... a lot...
| Endgame65 chapter 13 . 7/18/2009
You know, i can be irritating too. But that would probably put you off updating, so please, please update soon. You can't leave us hanging like that. You know, we're one of those few but loyal followings.
| Endgame65 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Update? Please? I can beg you know. This is really good, and it is summer now... well maybe for you, I have to take summer courses. Keep up the good work on both this story and Caliber.
| Endgame65 chapter 13 . 4/21/2009
Great chapter. What's with this Cole character? He seems pretty random. Anyway, keep up the great work and update soon.
| Sterenyk Strey chapter 13 . 4/21/2009
Oh, wicked! 'The bitch and her little pet', eh? Whumpy chapter next? Bloody hell! Like, even whumpier? Oh, did Sheppard wrap the chain around Korshad's neck while he was momentarily adjusting his hold on Birkita or something? In any case, great stuff. :-D
Kind of like Sheppard's/Dog's POV best, but that's just me. When is our boy going to show signs of recovery? A little heads up, mayhaps?
| Endgame65 chapter 12 . 4/10/2009
Aw, no present chapter? Thanks again for the update, I'd been waiting for it. Keep updating and I'll keep reading.
| Endgame65 chapter 11 . 3/25/2009
Great chapter once again. I think Sheppard is at least part Garou right, but not full-blooded so he can only change in the full-moon, but does that mean he could change someone else? Stupid nurse, I can't believe they'd be that dumb. Where was Ronon? Anyway keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to whatever comes next.
| Endgame65 chapter 10 . 3/17/2009
Great chapter once again. This story keeps getting better. I doubt things are going to go well for Sheppard on Earth, that's gonna be a mistake. I know they can't know what Sheppard and the city were considering, but they really think Sheppard would try to kill them? That was just the city's only response to his request. Can't wait for what's next. Keep up the good work.